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He is my grandpa!
When I was a kid I used to live in my grandfather's house. I don't really remember too much, but one thing that I won't forget was his awesome library! I remember this especially because he gave me a book called Do you know that? (Sabias qué?). even I've almost forgotten everything about it. It was a nice book because as a kid it made me discover many mysterious things and inspired my imagination. Thanks to my grandpa I could open my eyes to a new passion of reading books, even though I am not reading this kind of book now. I will try to do it again.
Now my grandfather or as I like to call him / as I call him, Abuelito (little grandfather in spanish), is 81 years old but he is still working, just now as farmer because he has fallen in love with the nature and animals. He is my inspiration and one of the strongest men who I have known.
Thanks to his patience and love, I'm the boy I am now.
I made a sketch today. We can't talk often because of time zone differences but last time in Skype I took a picture and I drew him.
**Overall, your writing was easy to read. You write well in English. :)
Color Key: Blue means that the phrase was wrong/awkward and I have corrected it in a way I thought sounded good; however, there are multiple ways to say this phrase.
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He is my grandpa!
When I was a kid, I used to lived in the my grandfather's house. I don't really remember too much, but one thing that I won't forget was his awesome library!. I especially remember specially this because he gave me a book called Do You Know That? (Sabias qué?) even though I almost forgot almost everything about it. It was a nice book because as a kid It makes helped me discover many mystery a lot of mysterious stuff and weak up strengthened my imagination. Thanks you to my grandpa I could open my eyes were opened to a new passion that is for reading books, even though I am not reading this kind of book now. I will try to do it read them again.Now my grandfather--or like I call him Abuelito (little grandfather in spanish)--is 81 years old. but He is still working, but now as farmer, because he fall fell in love with the nature and animals. He is my inspiration and one of the stronger strongest man men who I have known.
Thanks you to his patience and love, I'm the boy who I am.
I made a sketch today. We can't talk often because time of our time zones but the last time in we spoke on Skype I took a picture and I then drew him.
Very good writing! Something to remember about English... sometimes you have to be more specific than you do in Spanish. (For example, "my grandfather" tells the reader which grandfather it is; and "read them" tells the reader what you are going to do again.) Please let me know if you have questions about any of my other suggestions.
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