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About my job Today is my second day I worked here,it's not so bad. our company is main sells Mobile accessories,like bluetooth headset,charge,mobile power and so on.The products are main export to Indonesia,American and U.k,so I have to communicate with foreigner to discuss about the problems of price and quantity.As a newcomer, I didn't need to do that yet.Now,I just need to remember all kind of the product of our company. Other thing.This afternoon,a foreigner got here wanted to send a parcel when I was chatting whit my friends in my friend's store.I walked toward her and asked,"can I help you?"She said a lot,but I couldn't follow her,just knew she wanted to send a coat to her friend.It's depressing. Thanks a lot for everyone who corrected this text!

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About my job

Today is my second day (on the job/working here). I worked here It's not so bad.

Our company is mainly sells Mobile accessories, like bluetooth headsets, chargers, mobile power supplies and so on. The products are mainly for export to Indonesia, American and the U.K., so I have to communicate with foreigners to discuss about the problems of the price and quantity of orders. As a newcomer, I don't need to do that yet. Now, I just need to remember all the kinds of the products of our company sells.

There is other thing (bothering me/that is difficult).This afternoon, a foreigner got here wanted to send a parcel while I was chatting whit my friends in my friend's store. I walked toward her and asked, "can I help you?" She said a lot, but I couldn't follow her, I just knew she wanted to send a coat to her friend. It's depressing.

Thanks a lot for everyone who corrects this text!

 

Nice job! Don't worry. The more practice you have the better you will get. Have you tried to practice listening with online resources or movies or radio? That should help a lot. And if you stick with it you will improve quickly!

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About my job

Today is my second day, it's not so bad.

Our company mainly sells mobile accessories,like bluetooth headsets, chargers, external batteries and so on. The products are mainly exported to Indonesia, American and the UK ,so I have to communicate with foreigners to discuss problems of price and quantity. As a newcomer, I haven't needed to do that yet. Now, I just need to learn all the products of our company.

Another thing.This afternoon, a foreigner wanted to send a parcel when I was chatting with my friends in my friend's store. I walked toward her and asked, "Can I help you?" She said a lot, but I couldn't follow her, I just knew she wanted to send a coat to her friend. It was depressing.

Thanks a lot to everyone who corrected this text!

 

Stop using Chinese punctuation writing English. It looks awful. There is a space after every comma and full stop. Keep writing. You're already prettiest good. To improve listening comprehension watch more movies.

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