Muy bien! Bueno trabajo. No puedo corectar las palabras en amarillo, porque no entiendo. Pero escribe en español, puedo corectar en ingles. 

-Kevin

My problems about the English

I don't know how to start, even I don't know that write so I'll write my problems with English and other stuffs.
I'm I have been trying to learn English since for almost two weeks and I think that is a little difficult learning to learn to write good well. even I don't know if you are understanding me or If what I am writing sounds a little rare strange or funny.
I don't know when I must use the word "that" because in the Spanish it uses it often, so I write that in very many sentences. In adittion I don't know when using to use recall, remind and remember or start/begin, among other things. When I read an article in English I try to understand what it says, but I need to improve my writing, and so Just writing I'll just do it. As well as So much many people have learned English I hope can do it, it's very important for me learning to learn English because almost everything is written in English. For example the music that I heard hear (Indie-rock, Thrash-Metal, ska, Punk, etc) the books that I ask borrowed to borrow in the Library, the series that I see (Breaking Bad, M.D House, Friends, etc) and I'd like to make a lot of friends and i can help them with the spanish but First I must improve my english for so I can talk with people. So my first written piece is finished.

My problems about the English

I don't know how to start, even I don't know that what to write, so I'll write about my problems with English and other stuff/things as well.
I've been trying to learn English since for almost two weeks and I think that is a little difficult learning to write well, even especially when I don't know if you are understanding me or If what I am writing sounds a little rare odd/strange or funny.
I don't know when I must need to use the word "that" because in the Spanish it used often so I often find a way to use the word write "that" in many sentences. In adittion I don't know when to use recall, remind and remember or start/begin, amongst/along with various others (common expression). When I read an article in English, I try understand what it says, but I need to improve my writing and  Just by writing I'll do it. As well as So mandy people have learned English, I hope can do it. It's very important for me learning English because almost everything is written in English. For example, The music that I heard listen to (Indie-rock, Thrash-Metal, ska, Punk, etc) the books that I ask borrowed from The Library, the television series that I see watch (Breaking Bad, M.D House, Friends, etc) and I'd like to make a lot of friends and i can help them with the spanish but First I must improve my english so I can talk with people. Now my first written entry is finished.

Very nicely done...You're on your way!