Myself

Myself,what I used to believe in-; now it is all gone anyway. away.
Why did I wanted to change my self so desperately ?
The people who come become closer to me after the time, however, as time passes-; I know they are going to leave me anyway.
Then why did I wanted to change my self so severely?
I asked to my self whispering into my mind, but there was no answer, except an emptiness-; since it wasn't already in me.
So now, I look into  upon my self, wondering if you are lying hidden-; I will reach out my hand anyway.

Except can be replaced with but ( but you can keep it as well)

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Myself

Myself, What I used to believe in-; it is gone anyway no longer within me.

Why did I wanted to change my self myself so violently vehemently?

People Those who had become closer after the time, however, as time passes-; they are going to leave me anyway/eventually.

Then why did I wanted to change my self so such severely changes?

I asked to my self whispering into my mind, myself but there was no answer came, except an emptiness.-; since it wasn't already me After all, it had already gone from me.

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Myself

Myself- what I used to believe in, now it is gone way.
Why did I wanted to change myself so desperately?
People, with whom I become closer after some time, however, as time passes, are going way.
Then why did I wanted to change myself so severely?
I asked to myself whispering into my mind, but there was no answer, except an emptiness, since it wasn't already me.
So now, I look into myself, wondering if you are lying hidden, so I can try to reach out for you.

Myself

Myself, what I used to believe in-; it is gone anyway.
Why did I wanted to change my self so violently ?
People who come closer after the time, however, as time passes-; they are going to leave me anyway.
Then why did I wanted to change my self so severely?
I asked to my self whispering into my mind, but there was no answer, except an emptiness-; since it wasn't already me.