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Day 4-April 5th 谢谢你们帮助! 虽然我说中文不好也写汉字不好,现在学。 今天我去养老院。我那儿职工。然后我去妈妈朋友家。的时候妈妈朋友不在家,我照护他的妈妈。明天我也去他家。 今天我有很多功课! 星期一我去上课。上星期春假! Hopefully this is what I wrote: Thank you all for your help! even though I speak and write Chinese poorly, I am learning. Today I went to the nursing home. I volunteer there. After I went to my Mom's friend's house. When my mom's friend is not home, I take care of her mom. Tomorrow I will also go to her house. Tomorrow I have a lot of homework! M Monday I start classes. Last week was Spring Break!

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Day 4-April 5th

但愿以上内容是我在下面写的意思:

感谢大家的帮助!虽然我说、写中文还不太好,但我正在(努力的)学习中!

今天我去了护工的家里做义工。之后我又去了我妈妈朋友家,她(他)常不在家,我就(帮着)照看她(他)妈妈。明天我还将去那里。

 

明天我有很多家庭作业。

下周一开始上课了,这周还在春假中!

 

ps:1.中国人是以星期一为每周第一天,外国人是以星期日为第一天。因为今天是星期日,所以“last week”这里指的是本周,而不是上星期。

2.不太理解“M”,是笔误吗?

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今天我去養老院,我那兒職工(建議說法:我是那裡的志工)。

然後我去媽媽的朋友家。的時候媽媽朋友不在家,我照護他的媽媽(建議說法:媽媽的朋友不在家時我照顧她的媽媽)。

 

明天我也去他家(建議說法:明天我還是會去她家)。


 

今明天我有很多功課!
星期一我去上課。上星期春假!(建議說法:禮拜一開始上課。上星期是春假!)

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Day 4-April 5th

 

谢谢你们帮助! 虽然我说中文说得不好也写得汉字不好,还是初现在学。

今天我到去养老院去了。在我那儿职工义务工作。然后到我去妈妈朋友的家。当的时候妈妈朋友不在家的时候,我就会照护他的母亲妈妈[a more respectful term, especially when you are talking about somebody else's]。明天我也再去他家。

今天我有很多功课!
星期一我要/去上课/开学/ 了。上个星期是春假!

Hopefully this is what I wrote:

Thank you all for your help! even though I speak and write Chinese poorly, I am learning.

Today I went to the nursing home. I volunteer there. After I went to my Mom's friend's house. When my mom's friend is not home, I take care of her mom. Tomorrow I will also go to her house.

Tomorrow I have a lot of homework! M
Monday I start classes. Last week was Spring Break!

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Day 4-April 5th

谢谢你们帮助! 虽然我说中文不好也写汉字不好,现在学。

谢谢各位的帮助! 虽然我说中文說的不好也写汉字也寫的不好順手,但是现在正在学習。

今天我去养老院。我那儿职工。然后我去妈妈朋友家。的时候妈妈朋友不在家,我照护他的妈妈。明天我也去他家。

今天我去了养老院,我是那儿的职工。

然后我去妈妈的朋友家,的那时候妈妈的朋友不在家,但我照护了他的妈妈。明天我也還會去他家。

 

今天我有很多功课!
星期一我去上课。上星期春假!


今天我有很多功课!
上星期春假! 但星期一我會去上课。


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I didn't meant to put that "M" there after homework.

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