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Day 3:
今天我去市区. 我跟朋友会议。我们开始俱乐部。我们要帮助难民.
I have no idea how to write this. All I am trying to say is:
Today I went down town.
今天我进城了,
I had a meeting with some friends.
我约了一些朋友见面。
We created a club. We want to help refugees.
我们创办了一个俱乐部,目的是想帮一些流浪汉。
I'm trying to explain what I did today. I am in the process of helping create and expand a club that focuses on helping refugees and international students become accustomed to living in the United States.
The correct version:
我今天约了一些朋友在城里见面,我们创办了一个俱乐部,目的是为了帮助一些流浪汉,还有帮助一些留学到美国的学生适应美国的生活。同时也欢迎和我们有共同想法的朋友加入我们俱乐部,一起帮助那些须要帮助的人。
Day 3:
我试着说下我今天都做什么:今天我进城了.跟一些朋友们会谈,建立了一个想要帮助灾民的民间组织。 在创建和扩大这个民间组织过程中,我专注于帮助灾民和习惯于美国生活模式的国际学生。
今天我去了镇上,和一些朋友见面。我们创立了一个俱乐部,希望能够帮助有困难的人。
我想说说我今天所做的事情,我正在协助开展并扩大我们的俱乐部,能够专注于帮助有困难的人和帮助国际留学生习惯于在美国生活的过程。
Day 3:
今天我去市区. 我跟朋友会议。我们开始俱乐部。我们要帮助难民.
I have no idea how to write this. All I am trying to say is:
Today I went down town.今天我去城里。
I had a meeting with some friends.我和一些朋友有个聚会。
We created a club.我们创立了一个俱乐部。
We want to help refugees.我们想要帮助难民。
I'm trying to explain what I did today. I am in the process of helping create and expand a club that focuses on helping refugees and international students become accustomed to living in the United States.
Day 3:
今天我去市区. 我跟朋友会议。我们开始俱乐部。我们要帮助难民.
I have no idea how to write this. All I am trying to say is:
Today I went down town(今天我去了市中心). I had a meeting with some friends(我见了一些朋友). We created a club(我们办了一个俱乐部). We want to help refugees(我们想帮助难民们).
I'm trying to explain what I did today(我想表达我今天做了些什么). I am in the process of helping create and expand a club (我正在协助他们创办和扩大这个俱乐部)that focuses on helping refugees and international students become accustomed to living in the United States(这个俱乐部主要是去帮助难民们以及帮助那些国际生习惯美国的生活).
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