我最好的朋友

我最好的朋友四十八岁。他在家人的公司是当经理。但是他没不在办公室工作，他的工作在大船上在海。 

我在学校认识他的。那个时候他喜欢画画。现在他很喜欢捕鱼。他爱海。 

他的妻子是英国人。他们有两个女孩子，是孪生。现在她们在大学学习。 

你呢？谁是你最好的朋友？ 

My best friend.
My best friend is 48. He is a manager in the family company. But he doesn't work in an office. He works on ships at sea.
I met him at school. At that time he loved to paint. Now he likes to go fishing. He loves the sea.
His wife is English. They have 2 daughters. Twins. Now they are both at university.
What about you? Who is your best friend?

How about you? Who is your best friend?
(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

Still a little bit to add : )

我的最朋友 我最好的朋友

我的最朋友四十八岁。我最好的朋友四十八岁

在家人的公司他是经理。他在家族企业里 任职/当 经理

但是他没工作在办公室，他工作在大船在海。 但是他不再办公室工作，他在船上工作。
在学校我认识他。那个时候他喜欢画。我在学校认识他。那时候他喜欢画画。

现在他很喜欢捕鱼。他爱海。 现在他很喜欢钓鱼 (捕鱼 is what fishermen do for making a living,usually with specialized equipment, while 钓鱼 is what one could take as an interest, with simply fishing rod and bait.)
他的妻子是英国人。他们有两个女孩子，孪生。/or you could say 他们有两个女儿，是双胞胎

现在她们学习在大学。 她们在大学学习
你呢？谁是你的最朋友？ 谁是你最好的朋友

My best friend.
My best friend is 48. He is a manager in the family company. But he doesn't work in an office. He works on ships at sea.
I met him at school. At that time he loved to paint. Now he likes to go fishing. He loves the sea.
His wife is English. They have 2 daughters. Twins. Now they are both at university.
What about you? Who is your best friend?

How about you? Who is your best friend?
(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

我的最好朋友

最 is not"best", but "most"

我的最好朋友四十八岁。

在家人的公司他是经理。right

but more fluent :他在家族企业担任经理

家族企业 = family company

但是他没工作在办公室没在办公室工作just to remember the Chinese sequence，他工作在大船在海在大海的船上工作。

   when you put the emphasis on where the action happens:

    people+location+verb+......

在学校我认识他我在学校认识他。那个时候他喜欢画画。

画画 painting/drawing/sketching 画树paint/draw a tree 画花paint/draw a flower

现在他很喜欢捕鱼。他爱海。 cool
他的妻子是英国人。他们有两个女孩子，孪生。cool

现在她们学习在大学在大学学习。
你呢？谁是你的最好朋友？

My best friend.
My best friend is 48. He is a manager in the family company. But he doesn't work in an office. He works on ships at sea.
I met him at school. At that time he loved to paint. Now he likes to go fishing. He loves the sea.
His wife is English. They have 2 daughters. Twins. Now they are both at university.
What about you? Who is your best friend?

How about you? Who is your best friend?
(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

我的最好朋友

我的最好朋友四十八岁。他在家人的公司是经理。但是他没在办公室工作，他工作在大船上。
我是在学校认识他的。那个时候他喜欢画。现在他很喜欢捕鱼。他爱海。
他的妻子是英国人。他们有两个女孩子，孪生。现在她们在大学学习。
你呢？谁是你的最朋友？

My best friend.
My best friend is 48. He is a manager in the family company. But he doesn't work in an office. He works on ships at sea.
I met him at school. At that time he loved to paint. Now he likes to go fishing. He loves the sea.
His wife is English. They have 2 daughters. Twins. Now they are both at university.
What about you? Who is your best friend?

How about you? Who is your best friend?
(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)             注意语序DEAR,他在大学学习 is right. 他学习在大学 is wrong.

我的最好的朋友

我的最好朋友今年四十八岁。他在家人的公司是经理。但是他没在办公室工作，他工作是在船上出海。
在学校上学时我认识了他。那个时候他喜欢画。现在他很喜欢捕鱼。他爱海。
他的妻子是英国人。他们生了两个女孩子，是孪生。现在她们在大学学习。
你呢？谁是你的最好的朋友？

My best friend.
My best friend is 48. He is a manager in the family company. But he doesn't work in an office. He works on ships at sea.
I met him at school. At that time he loved to paint. Now he likes to go fishing. He loves the sea.
His wife is English. They have 2 daughters. Twins. Now they are both at university.
What about you? Who is your best friend?

How about you? Who is your best friend?
(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)