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A day in the forest Yesterday, it was an excellent day with sunshine and it was perfect for walking throw the forest. My friends and me went to pass a day together doing hiking. Everything was great. It was a very hot day, but we could put our feets into a lake that had very cold water. We saw a flock amoung trees and we tried to approach to them, but they ran to other directions. Finally, for recover energies, we ate cakes in a cafe. They passed a good day!

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A Day in the Forest

 

Yesterday, it was an excellent day with plenty of sunshine and it was perfect for walking throw in the forest. My friends and I me went to passed the a day together doing hiking. Everything was great. It was a very hot day, but and we could put our feets into the cold waters of the a lake that had very cold water. We saw a flock of birds amoung the trees and we tried to approach to them. but However, they ran to other flew away in all directions. Finally, for recover energies as we were recovering from the hike, we ate had cakes in a cafe. They passed It was a good day!

 

Indeed a great day!

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A day in the forest

Yesterday, it was an excellent day with sunshine and it was perfect for walking through the forest. My friends and I went to spend the day together doing hiking. Everything was great. It was a very hot day, but we could put our feets into a very cold lake that had very cold water. We saw a flock amoung the trees and we tried to approach to them, but they ran to in the other directions. Finally, for to recover our energy, we ate cakes in a cafe. They passed was a good day!

 

 

That sounds like a lovey day :-) 

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A day in the forest

Yesterday, it was an excellent day with sunshine and it was perfect for walking throw the forest. My friends and me went to pass a day together doing hiking. Everything was great. It was a very hot day, but we could put our feets into a lake that had very cold water. We saw a flock amoung trees and we tried to approach to them, but they ran to other directions. Finally, for recover energies, we ate cakes in a cafe. They passed a good day!

i think it will be better if it was ( for energy recovery )

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