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Mt. Takao I went to Mt. Takao in Tokyo. Mt. Takao has an altitude of 590 meters. It's easy to climb. I climbed it to eat "fuyu soba". "Fuyu soba" is noodle that can eat in Mt. Takao in winter season. But It snowed in Tokyo for these past several days, a noodle shop did not open. I'm tired because the way was a bad road by snow, too. It was serious in various ways, but I had a good time!!

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Mt. Takao

I went to Mt. Takao in Tokyo. Mt. Takao It has an altitude of 590 meters, . It's an easy to climb. I climbed it I ascended the mountain just to eat "fuyu soba", "Fuyu soba" is a kind of noodles that one can eat in Mt. Takao in there during the winter season.


But It had been snowing in Tokyo for these past several days, a and so those noodle shops did not open. I'm was tired because the way was a due to bad road conditions by snow, too. However, in all It was seriousness, in various ways, but I had a good/wonderful time!!

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Mt. Takao

I went to Mt. Takao in Tokyo. Mt. Takao has an altitude of 590 meters. It's easy to climb. I climbed it to eat "fuyu soba". "Fuyu soba" are noodles that you can eat in Mt. Takao during the winter season.
But It snowed in Tokyo for these past several days and the noodle shop did not open. I'm tired because the way it was a bad road through the snow. 
It was serious dangerous in various ways, but I had a good time!!

I think you meant dangerous?? But not sure...
But then that would contract that the mountain is easy to climb haha.

Either way good work, keep it up.  

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Mt. Takao

I went to Mt. Takao in Tokyo. Mt. Takao has an altitude of 590 meters. It's easy to climb. I climbed it to eat "fuyu soba". "Fuyu soba" is noodle that can be eaten in Mt. Takao in the winter season.
But since it has snowed in Tokyo for these past several days, a the noodle shop did not open. I'm tired because the way there was a bad road in the snow, too.
It was serious in various (several/a few) ways, but I had a good time!!

 

Very good, definitely sounds like an interesting time :)

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Mt. Takao

I went to Mt. Takao in Tokyo. Mt. Takao has an altitude of 590 meters. It's easy to climb. I climbed it to eat "fuyu soba". "Fuyu soba" is noodle that you can eat in Mt. Takao in winter season.
But It snowed in Tokyo for these past several days, and the a noodle shop did not open. I'm tired because the way was a bad road by snow, too (because it was a bad road through snow).
It was serious (??) in various ways, but I had a good time!!

 

Hi,

My corrections are in red and suggestions for a more natural expression in blue. Where I don't understand what you are trying to say I have used question marks. Good effort.

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