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你怎么样? 你们好,你怎么样?。我有二哥哥和一妹妹。他们也住在U.S。我和哥哥去吃。我不太喜欢鱼,我吃古老肉和抄饭和有蔬菜汤。周末我喜欢在哥哥里休息。

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你怎么样?

 

你们好,你怎么样?。[Chinese don't express this way. 你们好 = "you are good" is equivalent to "How are you?" 你怎啦 means "what's wrong with you?"! Very different in meaning] 我有二位哥哥和一妹妹。他们也住在 美国U.S。我和哥哥去吃飯 ["eat rice" means to have a meal]。我不太喜欢吃鱼[You need to have a verb here.  Translating from "I don't quite like fish" is wrong in Chinese.  It literally means you don't like the creature itself. ],我喜欢吃咕嚕古老[What you just said that you like "ancient old meat" and not sweet and sour pork! LOL ]肉, 和抄炒饭和有蔬菜汤。周末的时的我喜欢在哥哥那边里休息。[What you wrote was literally, I like to rest INSIDE my elder brother!]


As you can see, translating literally from one language to another has plenty of pitfalls.  One figurative sense in one language does not have the same sense in the other :)

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你怎么样?

你们好,最近过得都好吗?。我有两个哥哥和一个妹妹。他们也住在美国。我和哥哥去吃饭。因为我不太喜欢吃鱼,所以就吃了古老肉和炒饭,还有蔬菜汤。周末的时候我喜欢在哥哥家里休息。

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你怎么样?

你们好,你怎么样?。我有两个哥哥和一妹妹。他们也住在美国。我和哥哥去吃。我不太喜欢鱼,我吃古老肉和抄饭和有蔬菜汤。周末我喜欢在哥哥家里休息。

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你们好,你怎么样?。

你們好,最近過得怎樣? 1#

 

我有二哥哥和一妹妹。他们也住在U.S。

我有兩個哥哥和一個妹妹.他們也在住U.S.2#

 

我和哥哥去吃。我不太喜欢鱼,我吃古老肉和抄饭和有蔬菜汤。

我和哥哥去吃飯.我不太喜歡吃魚,我吃了古老肉和炒飯還有蔬菜湯.3#


周末我喜欢在哥哥里休息。

週末我喜歡在哥哥家裡休息. 4#

 

1# “你怎么样?”could be replaced by "最近過得怎樣“ 

almost same meaning but more fluency than 你怎么样

 

2# If something is countable, you need the " unit "

 

3# you could say 吃飯 吃東西, it is better than saying 吃

    and if you "had" eat something you could put "了" after “吃” 

     I ate the president lest night = 我昨天晚上吃了總統.

4# 周末我喜欢在哥哥里休息。 means : I like to stay in my "brother" at the weekend.

     週末我喜歡在哥哥家裡休息. means : I like to stay in my "brother's home" at the weekend.

     家 = home

 

 

Your Chinese is way better than my english, its my pleasure to help any foreign people to study chinese.

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你怎么样?

你们好,你怎么样?(sounds kinda odd)。我有两个哥哥和一个妹妹。他们也住在美国。我准备和哥哥一起去吃饭。我不太喜欢鱼,我喜欢吃咕咾肉和炒饭和有蔬菜汤。周末我喜欢在哥哥家里休息。

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