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第五天 我:“爸爸,你好!” 爸爸:”你好!“ 我:“你想做什么?” 爸爸:”想看这本书。“ 我:“那本书叫什么?” 爸爸:”书名叫“Inferno。这本书很好。“ 我:”我可以看那本书吗?” 爸爸:“你可以后我看这本书。“ Me: "Dad, hi!" Dad: "Hello!" Me: "What do you want to do?" Dad: "I want to read this book." Me: "What is that book called?" Dad: "It is called "Inferno"." Me: "Can I read it?" Dad: "You can read it after me." Thanks again!

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第五天

我:“爸爸,你好!”
爸爸:”你好!“
我:“你想做什么?” = "What do you think you are doing"! 要想做什么嗎?
爸爸:”想我要看这本书。“
我:“那本书名叫什么啊?”
爸爸:”书名叫着地獄  [if you are referring to Dan Brown's Inferno]。这本书很精彩好。“ ]
我:”我可以借給我看那本书吗?”
爸爸:“你可以后当我看完了, 你就可以这本书。“

Me: "Dad, hi!"
Dad: "Hello!"
Me: "What do you want to do?"
Dad: "I want to read this book."
Me: "What is that book called?"
Dad: "It is called "Inferno"."
Me: "Can I read it?"
Dad: "You can read it after me."



Thanks again!

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第五天

我:“爸爸,你好!”
爸爸:”你好!“
我:“你想做什么?”
爸爸:”想看这本书。“
我:“那这本书叫什么?”
爸爸:”书名叫“Inferno。这本书很好 这是一本很好的书(I think it's better)。“
我:”我可以看那本书一下吗?”
爸爸:“你可以后我看这本书在我看完后再看。“

Me: "Dad, hi!"
Dad: "Hello!"
Me: "What do you want to do?"
Dad: "I want to read this book."
Me: "What is that book called?"
Dad: "It is called "Inferno"."
Me: "Can I read it?"
Dad: "You can read it after me."



Thanks again!

1

第五天

我:“爸爸,你好!”
爸爸:”你好!“
我:“你想做什么?”
爸爸:”想看这本书。“
我:“那本书叫什么?”
爸爸:”书名叫“Inferno。这本书很好。“
我:”我可以看那本书吗?”
爸爸:“你可以后我看这本书。“ (在我看完之后再看这本书)

Me: "Dad, hi!"
Dad: "Hello!"
Me: "What do you want to do?"
Dad: "I want to read this book."
Me: "What is that book called?"
Dad: "It is called "Inferno"."
Me: "Can I read it?"
Dad: "You can read it after me."



Thanks again!

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That makes sense. And yes, I can understand your English. Thank you! (The only resources I can find teach me formalish Chinese).
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Our culture is different, so in china ,children rarely told their Dad "你好,爸爸" in our daily life(I know you people always say"hi, Dad."), It is too formal, so I rewrite the stroy,something based on life. (my English is not very well, can you understand?) 我:“爸爸。” 爸爸:“嗯。” 我:“你在干吗?” 爸爸:”我想看看这本书。“ 我:“这本书叫什么啊?” 爸爸:”书名叫“Inferno。这本书很好。“ 我:”那我可以看看吗?” 爸爸:“当然可以啊,等我看完了就给你看吧。“ I hope I can help you, thank you for your help me before.

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