My Life

My mother-in-law will leave and get go back to her home which is a country (a country?) in Hebei province on next Sunday. I hope she stays here and celebrates the Chinese lunar New Year with us but she don't doesn't want to. My sister-in-law will come here and help me see her off at the bus station. And then After, I will take care of my child myself. I am anxious about if I can do it well. My daughter is 14 months old now. Fortunately she is healthy and obedient. Though she can only speak a little few words, but she can understand most of what we say. My husband and I love her so much. In most of time, she sleeps well, eats well and plays well. But sometimes, she doesn't. She sleeps with me at night. Last night she woke up and cried last because she wanted to go to the toilet. After that she went to sleep again. But I can not couldn't go back to sleep. So I read a book named The Kite Runner using my cellphone on the bed. It tells us a story about Afghanistan. It impressed me. The children there is are lacking of food and clothing. The war made many children leftleave home, left leave their parents. They were too young to protect themselves. After reading that, I think fortunately our country is peaceful. But there is are also many criminals who damage child harm children. I will try my best to take care of my child well until she grows up. I will teach her how to protect herself. Before the Chinese New Year, I want to do a cleaning in my house. I think this is a good hobby which I learntthrone from my parents. That's all for today. Good luck for me and for you!

You submitted this under the wrong category 'Mandarin', I suggest resubmitting it under 'English'!

My Life

My mother-in-law will leave and get go back to her home, which is a country county? in Hebei province on next Sunday. I hope she stays here [instead] and celebrates the Chinese lunar New Year with us, but she don't doesn't want to. My sister-in-law will come here and to help me see her off at the bus station. And then Then I will be take taking care of my child by myself. I am anxious about if I can do it well. My daughter is 14 months old now. Fortunately, she is healthy and obedient. Though she can only speak a little bit, words but she can understand most of what we say. My husband and I love her so much. In most Most of the time, she sleeps well, eats well and plays well. But , but sometimes, she doesn't. She sleeps with me at night. Last night, she woke up and cried last because she wanted to go to the toilet bathroom. After that, she went to sleep again. But I can not couldn't get back to sleep. So, I read a book named The Kite Runner using my cellphone on the bed. It tells us a story about [children in] Afghanistan. It impressed me. The children there is are lacking of in food, and clothing. The war has made many children left leave home, and left leave their parents. They were too young to protect themselves. After reading that, I think [we're] fortunately that our country is peaceful. But there is are also many criminals who damage harm children. I will try my best to take of my child well until she's grown grows up. I will teach her how to protect herself. Before the Chinese New Year, I want to do a cleaning in my house. I think this is a good hobby [habit] which I throne learned from my parents. That's all for today. Good luck for me and for you!

[Nicely done. I like doing corrections such that they read like I, as a native speaker, would've written it...including idioms and what-not. There weren't any huge mistakes. The things I put in brackets [like this] are where I'm not 100% sure of what you were trying to say so I put in what felt right to me via inference. The important thing to take-away from my comments though is that I understood what you meant to say almost perfectly! Just needs to some final polishing to sound like an American speaker :) ]