My College Life

This is my first year studying in university. At the beginning of this term, I had been through two weeks military training. It's was a hard time but I will always remember my peseverance in hard training. Then with curiosity, I began to go to class. My major is mathematics, so we have lots of lessons about math. At first I feel boring for study only math all day long, but with time pass by there are various activities and lectures. I have learned Guzheng since 8 years old and still very interested in it, so I participate in folk music community. In there many students that like folk music gather together to practice our instrument.
Now it had passed half a semester. I feel very very busy everyday, so many things to deal with that couldn't sleep early than 12 o'clock everyday. My teacher suggest me to improve my time efficiency and try to learn how to manage my time. Come to university is a growth in my life. I wish I could been through it smoothly .:)

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My College Life

This is my first year studying in at college university.__At the beginning of this term,_I had been through two weeks of military training.__It's was a hard time but I will always remember my peseverance in from the hard training. .Then with curiosity,_I began to go to my math major and classes ,my major is mathematic so we have lots of lesson about math.At first I feel which were plenty, all day long and boring. for study only math all day long,but With time passing by, there are I had other various activities besides going to the  and lectures.__I had learnt the Guzheng (zither) since I was eight 8years old and still very interested in improving myself and it,so I participated in the folk music community.  in There are many students that who like folk music and they gather come together to practice our instruments. .

Now it had passed half a semester had passed and ,I feel very very busy everyday; so many things to deal do with that I am unable tp get tp bed before midnight. couldn't sleep early than12o'clock everyday .My teacher suggested to me that I need to improve my time management efficiency and try to learn how to manage my time.__Coming to the university is a growth in for my life.  I wish I it could been through it gone smoother.  .:)

My college life

This is my first year studying in university.At the beginning of this term,I had been through two weeks military training,it's was a hard time but I will always remember my peseverance in hard training .Then with curiosity,I began to go to class ,my major is mathematics so we have lots of lessons about math.At first I feel boring for study only math all day long,but with time pass by,there are various activities and lecture.i have learned Guzheng since 8 years old and still very interested in it,so I participate in folk music community,in there many students that like folk music gather together to practice our instrument .
Now it had passed half a semester,I feel very very busy everyday,so many things to deal with that couldn't sleep early than12o'clock everyday .My teacher suggest me to improve my time efficiency and try to learn how to manage my time.Come to university is a growth in my life,I wish I could been through it smoothly .:)