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Just a couple of things that are still wrong in Ryu's correction (the red bits), and I changed the rest to make it sound more natural.
Hello.
I'm going to introduce myself :))I'm 18 years old and I go to Hokusei University in Japan, but I've been living in England since September! I go to New College, Nottingham to study English :D
I started studying English about 7 years ago, but I only studied writing, listening and vocabulary at the beginning. I started to study spoken English in April of this year. I wanna be bilingual!! But I'm not very good at speaking English yet...
I want to study more... If you can, please teach me English :))
See you,
Hello
I am going to introduce myself :))I am 18 years old and I go to Hokusei University in Japan. But have lived in England since September! I go to New College Nottingham to study English :D
I started studying English about 7 years ago, but It was just written listening and vocabulary courses. I started studying to Speaking English since April this year. I wanna be a bilingual person!! But, my oral English skills are still bad...
I want to study more... If you can, please teach me English :))
See you
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This is better
Hello
I'm going to introduce myself.
I'm 18 years old. And, I've attended Hokusei University in Japan. But I've been living in England since last September where I study English at New College Nottingham.
I started studying English about 7 years ago, but at that time I studied only writing, listening and vocabulary. I've been studying spoken English since April, 2010. I want to be bilingual but my speaking ability isn't very good yet.
I want to study more. Can you please help me improve my ability to speak English?
See you, ________________ < put your name here.
Matthew Armstrong is right. You need to work on sounding a bit more natural. However,
you also need to continue to learn to write English properly. I know it's very difficult, but
I think speaking with native English speakers (for you) is the best way for you to learn /
improve your spoken English ability.
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