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Hello I am going to introduce myself :)) I am 18 years old. And, I go to Hokusei University in Japan. But, now, I am liveing in England since September! I go to New College Nottingham to stady English :D I started stady English about 7 years ago. But, It was just Writting, Listening and Vocabulary. I started stady Speaking English since April in this year. I wanna be bilingual!! But, My Speaking English skill is still bad... I want to stady more... If you can, Please teach me English :)) See you,

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Just a couple of things that are still wrong in Ryu's correction (the red bits), and I changed the rest to make it sound more natural.

 

Hello.

I'm going to introduce myself :))
I'm 18 years old and I go to Hokusei University in Japan, but I've been living in England since September! I go to New College, Nottingham to study English :D
I started studying English about 7 years ago, but I only studied writing, listening and vocabulary at the beginning. I started to study spoken English in April of this year. I wanna be bilingual!! But I'm not very good at speaking English yet...
I want to study more... If you can, please teach me English :))

See you,

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Hello

I am going to introduce myself :))
I am 18 years old and I go to Hokusei University in Japan. But have lived in England since September! I go to New College Nottingham to study English :D
I started studying English about 7 years ago, but It was just written listening and vocabulary courses. I started studying to Speaking English since April this year. I wanna be a bilingual person!! But, my oral English skills  are still bad...
I want to study more... If you can, please teach me English :))

See you
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Hello

I'm going to introduce myself.
I'm 18 years old. And, I've attended Hokusei University in Japan. But I've been living in England since last September where I study English at New College Nottingham.
I started studying English about 7 years ago, but at that time I studied only writing, listening  and vocabulary. I've been studying spoken English since April, 2010. I want to be bilingual but my speaking ability isn't very good yet.
I want to study more.  Can you please help me improve my ability to speak English?
See you, ________________ < put your name here.

Matthew Armstrong is right.  You need to work on sounding a bit more natural. However,
you also need to continue to learn to write English properly.  I know it's very difficult, but
I think speaking with native English speakers (for you) is the best way for you to learn /
improve your spoken English ability.

Red                  = Capitalization
Blue                 =  Correction and Spelling
Green               =  A more natural way to say / more common
Purple               =  My comment or suggestion
Underline          = Punctuation and/ or  spacing
 

 

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