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我觉得接触工作是个很好的主意。工作有助于人们赚钱或者花钱。工作丰富人们的生活
I think coming into contact with jobs is a good idea. Jobs can help contribute people to make money or pocket money. Work can enriching the lives of people.
我能充分发挥我的特长。也许因为我是令人印象深刻的人,他们会给我丰厚的报酬。
I can fully display my strengths. Perhaps, because I am such an impressive person, that they will give me a big reward.
就目前来说我找把工作放在第一位。我将用我的手机来找工作,要不我就继续读书
For now, I will put job searching first. I will use my cell phone to find jobs, otherwise I'll continue studying.
可能许多人想的都一样。我觉得那边会很早就满了。我会赶快走,这是我的主要目标。
Maybe a lot of people think the same. I think being early there will be full. I will quickly go, this is my main objective.
不找工作我干嘛。
If I'm not looking for jobs, what am I doing?
我忙着学习生物。
I'm busy studying biology.
早在三个月前,她就想去留学了。
As early as 3 months ago, she wanted to study aboard.
这个看来竞争很大
This seems like it has a lot of competition.
一些相比之下比较好的工作。会难找到。
Some jobs are generally good. In contrast, they are hard to find.
学英文很重要,否则为什么很多人想学英文?
Studying English is very important, otherwise why do a lot of people want to study English?
当然,那里有很多风景秀丽的地方。走得很远,所以你能看见最美的风景。
Of course, there is a lot of scenery places. Take the longer. So you can see the most beautiful scenery places.
第十二课
我觉得接触工作是个很好的主意。工作把人有助于人们赚钱或者零花钱(”零花钱“is a noun ,but "花钱”is a verb)。工作吧人丰富生活 丰富人们的生活
I think coming into contact with jobs is a good idea. Jobs can help contribute people to make money or pocket money. Work can enriching the lives of people.
我能充分发挥我的特长。也许因为我是可观令人印象深刻(有能力)(可观can not used to describe a person,you can say"可观的收入)的人,他们会给我很大(hier you can use "可观的”)报酬。
I can fully display my strengths. Perhaps, because I am such an impressive person, that they will give me a big reward.
我就目前来说找我把工作放在第一位。我会用我的手机来找工作,如果找不到工作的话否则我会继续读书
For now, I will put job searching first. I will use my cell phone to find jobs, otherwise I'll continue studying.
可能大批的人(you'd better say"很多人“)和我想的一样。我觉得在那边早就不满(This sentence makes no sense,you are not make yourself understood if you say so)。我会赶快走,这样这是我的主要目标。
Maybe a lot of people think the same. I think being early there will be full. I will quickly go, this is my main objective.
不找工作我干嘛。 (You'd better say"不找工作的话,我干嘛呢?”)
If I'm not looking for jobs, what am I doing?
我忙着学习生物。
I'm busy studying biology.
她早在三个月前,她就想留学。
As early as 3 months ago, she wanted to study aboard.
这个看来有很多很竞争 (You can use "大“ or "激烈” to describe "竞争“)
This seems like it has a lot of competition.
一些工作比较好。相比之下它们很难找。
Some jobs are generally good. In contrast, they are hard to find.
学英文很重要,否则为什么很多人(This is right,but if you use "那么多人”hier,it will be better.)想学英文?
Studying English is very important, otherwise why do a lot of people want to study English?
当让咋当然,那里有很多风景区。不远千里,所以你能看见最好的风景区。 (走远点吧,以便你能欣赏到最美的风景)
Of course, there is a lot of scenery places. Take the longer. So you can see the most beautiful scenery places.
第十二课
我觉得接触工作是个很好的主意。工作把人有助于赚钱或者零花钱。工作吧人丰富生活
I think coming into contact with jobs is a good idea. Jobs can help contribute people to make money or pocket money. Work can enriching the lives of people.
我能充分发挥我的特长。也许因为我是可观的人,他们会给我很大鼓励。
I can fully display my strengths. Perhaps, because I am such an impressive person, that they will give me a big reward.
我就目前来说找把工作放在第一位。我会用我的手机来找工作,否则我会继续读书
For now, I will put job searching first. I will use my cell phone to find jobs, otherwise I'll continue studying.
可能大部分的人想得一样。我觉得在那边早就不满。我会赶快走,这样我的主要目标。
Maybe a lot of people think the same. I think being early there will be full. I will quickly go, this is my main objective.
不找工作我能干嘛。
If I'm not looking for jobs, what am I doing?
我忙着学习生物。
I'm busy studying biology.
她早在三个月前,她就想留学。
As early as 3 months ago, she wanted to study aboard.
这个看来有很多很竞争
This seems like it has a lot of competition.
一些工作比较好。相比之下它很难找。
Some jobs are generally good. In contrast, they are hard to find.
学英文很重要,否则为什么很多人想学英文?
Studying English is very important, otherwise why do a lot of people want to study English?
当然咋那里有很多风景区。不远千里,所以你能看见最好的风景区。
Of course, there is a lot of scenery places. Take the longer. So you can see the most beautiful scenery places.
第十二课
我觉得接触工作很好主意。工作把人有助于使人赚钱或者挣一些钱零花钱。工作使人丰富吧人丰富生活
I think coming into contact with jobs is a good idea. Jobs can help contribute people to make money or pocket money. Work can enriching the lives of people.
我能充分发挥我的特长。也许因为我是令人印象深刻可观的人,他们会给我很多大报酬。
I can fully display my strengths. Perhaps, because I am such an impressive person, that they will give me a big reward.
我就目前来说,找我把工作放在第一位。我会用我的手机来找工作,否则我会继续读书
For now, I will put job searching first. I will use my cell phone to find jobs, otherwise I'll continue studying.
可能大部分人的想法都一样批的人想一样。我觉得在那边早就不满。我会赶快走,这样我的主要目标。 ???
Maybe a lot of people think the same. I think being early there will be full. I will quickly go, this is my main objective.
不找工作,那我做什么干嘛。
If I'm not looking for jobs, what am I doing?
我忙着学习生物。
I'm busy studying biology.
她早在三个月前,她就想留学。
As early as 3 months ago, she wanted to study aboard.
这个看来有很多很竞争力
This seems like it has a lot of competition.
一些工作比较好。相比之下它很难找。
Some jobs are generally good. In contrast, they are hard to find.
学英文很重要,否则为什么很多人想学英文?
Studying English is very important, otherwise why do a lot of people want to study English?
当然。当让咋那里有很多风景区。不远千里,所以你就能看见最美好的风景区。
Of course, there is a lot of scenery places. Take the longer. So you can see the most beautiful scenery places.
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