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Feeling Alone feeling
When I was a child, I really feared loneliness "lonely" feeling but now I don't afraid any more but not anymore. Sometimes, when I do something am alone, it doesn't not mean that nobody one cares about me. It just means that I can do anything on my own without the help of from anyone. When I go to the cinema and watch a movies alone, I feel so comfortable because I don't need to care what kind of movies my friends really wanted to watch. When I eat alone, I don't need have to care if anyone is lookinged at me. When I am happy, I can sing or dance and don't care about anyone laughing at me. When I walk alone, I can stop to see anything at anytime and don't scare not worrying if someone is waiting for me. So I think it this isn't no longer a bad feeling.
I love that this feeling now. It/This doesn't mean I encourage we should stay am being aloof. If I don't have friends, I won't don't know the greatest of would know that this feeling of being alone is. If I don't have anyone to care, I can't know what is won't experience what happiness is. what is living for everyone and know living for myself is greatest thing. Having lived for someone, I know what is living for myself is - the greatest!
Oh, it's my opinion. I don't know if it is wrong conception. Just a ranting of my opinion. I don't know if this is a right concept for others.
I hope everyone fixes the mistakes you can fix my mistakes or to improve what I had written.for me. Thanks you so much. [This way, it is more endearing and connecting the reader to you.] (Thanks Gabriel for fixing this sentence. for me)
Feeling alone.
When I was a child I was really fear afraid of that "lonely" feeling, but now I'm not afraid any more. When I do something alone it doesn't mean that nobody cares about me, it means I can do anything on my own without the help of anyone others. When I go to the cinema and watch a movie alone, I feel so comfortable because I don't need to care what movies my friends want to watch. When I eat alone, I don't need to care about anyone looked looking at me. When I'm happy, I can sing or dance and don't not care about anyone laughing at me. When I walk, I can stop to see anything at anytime and don't not scare if someone's waiting for me. So I think it isn't a bad feeling.
I love that feeling. This doesn't mean I encourage we should people to stay aloof. If I don't have, because without friends I we won't don't know the greatest of this feeling. If I don't have anyone to care about, I can't know what is happy happiness, what is it means to living live for everyone and know that living for myself is the greatest thing.
Oh, it's this is my opinion. I don't know if it is wrong conception I'm not sure if you'd agree.
I hope everyone fixes the some mistakes for me. Thanks so much. (Thanks Gabriel for fixing this sentence for me)
I tried not to mess around with the overall structure of your notebook entry. Also, in some areas, I wasn't quite sure what you were trying to say. Hopefully, I've still managed to express the same sentiment. The expression "wrong concept" doesn't really fit in well with this kind of opinion, you, as well as anyone else, are entitled to your opinion. When talking about things like race, religion, etc., the expression "wrong concept" would be a little bit more appropriate. Still, opinions are just that, they express your feelings about something, and that's just how it is, but that's getting off topic.
Overall, you did very well. :)
Feeling Alone feeling
When I was a child, I really feared feeling "lonely" feeling but now I don't feel afraid any more. When I do something alone, it doesn't mean nobody cares about me, it means I can do anything on my own without the anyone's help of anyone. When I go to the cinema and watch a movie alone, I feel so comfortable because I don't need to care about what movies my friends want to watch. When I eat alone, I don't need to care if anyone looks me. When I am happy, I can sing or dance and don't care if anyone laughs at me. When I walk, I can stop to see anything at anytime and don't care if someone's waiting for me. So I think it isn't a bad feeling.
I love that feeling. It doesn't mean that I encourage recommend that we should stay aloof. If I don't have friends, I won't don't know how great of this feeling is. If I don't have anyone to care about, I won't know what is it is to be happy, what is living for everyone and to know living for myself is greatest thing.
Oh, it's my opinion. I don't know if it is wrong conception.
I hope everyone someone fixes the mistakes for me. Thanks so very much. (Thanks Gabriel for fixing this sentence for me)
Alone feeling
When I was a child, I used to fear "lonely" feeling but now I am not afraid any more. When I do something by myself doesn't mean nobody cares me, it means I myself can do anything without the help of anyone. When I go to watch movie in cinema alone, I feel so comfortable because I don't need to care what movies that my friends want to watch are. When I eat alone, I don't need to care if anyone stares at me. When I happy, I can sing and dance without worrying anyone can see and laugh at me. When I walk, I can stop to see anything at anytime and don't mind if someone's waiting for me. So I think that is not bad at all.
I love that feeling doesn't mean I encourage people should stay aloof. If I have a friend, I will never know the greatest of this feeling. If I don't have anyone to care, I will never know what is happy, (what is living for everyone and know living for myself is greatest thing. --> quite ambiguous. What do you mean?)
I don't know whether it is right or wrong. However, it is just my opinion!
Hope everyone fixes the mistakes for me. Thanks so much. (Thanks Gabriel for fixing this sentence for me)
Alone feeling
When I was a child, I really fear "lonely" feeling but now I don't afraid any more. When I do something alone doesn't mean nobody cares me, it means I can do anything in my own without the help of anyone. When I go to the cinema and watch a movie alone, I feel so comfortable because I don't need to care what movies my friends want to watch. When I eat alone, I don't need to care if anyone looked me. When I am happy, I can sing or dance and don't care anyone laugh at me. When I walk, I can stop to see anything at anytime and don't scare if someone's waiting for me. So I think it isn't bad feeling.
I love that feeling doesn't mean I encourage we should stay aloof. If I don't have friend, I won't don't know the greatest of this feeling. If I don't have anyone to care, I can't know what is happy, what is living for everyone and know living for myself is greatest thing.
Oh, it's my opinion. I don't know if it is wrong conception.
Hope everyone fixes the mistakes for me. Thanks so much. (Thanks Gabriel for fixing this sentence for me)
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