你出你的心灵？你疯了吗？

One more joke which i tried to translate chinese. let's criticize it.

我再一次笑话尝试翻译中文。 我再一次尝试用中文来翻译一个笑话。

一位老师走在大街上走并，看见三个小孩子。
他们一边喝啤酒抽烟，一边并打麻将。
老师惊呼：你们的做什么？！？为什么你们不是在学校？
他们的头目领头问他：你疯了吗出你的心灵？谁在五岁就去上学，在五岁？ 

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English version:

Teacher walk down the street and see three boys.
They have playing cards, drink beer and smoke.
He cried: what are you doing? Why are you not at school?
Leader of them said: are you out of your mind? who has going to school in five years old?

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这是一则有意思的笑话，写得不错，加油！

你出你的心灵？

One more joke which i tried to translate chinese. let's criticize it.

我再一次笑话尝试翻译中文。

老师在大街上走并看见三个小孩子。
他们喝啤酒，抽烟并打麻将。
老师惊呼：你们在做什么？！？为什么你们不去学校？
他们的头目问他：你出你的心灵？谁去上学，在五岁？

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English version:

Teacher walk down the street and see three boys.
They have playing cards, drink beer and smoke.
He cried: what are you doing? Why are you not at school?
Leader of them said: are you out of your mind? who has going to school in five years old?

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PS. my english is not very good too, sorry if i am wrong somewhere, esspecially times difficult for me.

老师走在大街上看见三个男孩儿。
他们边抽烟喝酒边打麻将。
老师惊呼：你们在做什么？！？为什么不去学校？（后面那个“你们”省略了比较通顺） 
当中领头的说：你疯了？谁五岁的时候去上学？

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English version:

Teacher walk down the street and see three boys.
They have playing cards, drink beer and smoke.
He cried: what are you doing? Why are you not at school?
Leader of them said: are you out of your mind? who has going to school in five years old?

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你出你的心灵？

One more joke which i tried to translate chinese. let's criticize it.

我再一次笑话尝试翻译中文。

老师在大街上走并看见三个小孩子。
他们喝啤酒，抽烟并打麻将。
老师惊呼：你们在做什么？！？为什么你们不在学校？
他们的头目问他：你疯了吗？谁去上学，我们才五岁？

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English version:

Teacher walk down the street and see three boys.
They have playing cards, drink beer and smoke.
He cried: what are you doing? Why are you not at school?
Leader of them said: are you out of your mind? who has going to school in five years old?

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PS. my english is not very good too, sorry if i am wrong somewhere, esspecially times difficult for me.