LOVE and RESPECT!
Love is something which is sacred. When love alive, we can sacrifice to each other. But if this sacrifice just come in one trend. I think we will feel tired and not respect!
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LOVE and RESPECT!
Love is something which/that is sacred. When love is alive, we can make sacrifices to for each other. But if this sacrifice just comes in one trend from one side.,* I think we will feel tired and not respect!
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*I correct you in this way because I think you meant "when only one of the two people is willing to make sacrifices"
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LOVE and RESPECT!
Love is something which is sacred. When love is alive, we can make sacrifices to for each other. But if this sacrifice just come in one becomes a trend, I think we will feel tired and not respect!
Good try :) Maybe next time write about love and respect in different paragraphs.
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