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So, now is the deep night, and I dare [suggestion: Now, in middle of the night I want] improve my English. You could ask, why now, ask you? There are several reasons.
1. I don't work now, therefore [suggestion: so] I have a lot of free time.
2. I'm very love the night very much. It's the time, when I feel freedom. I this need me this, because I'm creative person.

And now I'm here. therefore Please correct my mistakes and ask me questions [suggestion: also you can ask me about something], and then I'll develop [suggestion 1: continue; suggestion 2: because I would continue conversation].
Thank you, my friends =)

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So, now the deep night it is very late, and I dare improve my English. Why now,  you ask? There are several reasons.
1. I don't work now late at night. Therefore, I have a lot of free time.
2. I love the night. It is a time when I feel free. I need this feeling because I am a creative person.
And now I'm here, therefore correct my mistakes and ask me questions, and then I'll improve.
Thank you my friends =)

Late at night is my favorite time too! Good job...

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So, now the deep night, (The deep night sets in) and I dare to improve my English (and I would like to improve my English). Why now, (asketh thou? :D Не используйте этой фразы на английском, я просто шучу :) Вот и правильный вариант: Why now, you might ask.") There are several reasons.
1. I don't work now, therefore I have a lot of free time.
2. I'm very really love the night-time. This is the time, when I feel most free, this need me, and I need this, because I am creative. person.
Now I'm here, so please correct my mistakes and ask me questions, and then I'll shall progress forward.
Thank you, my friends =)