Diary-Looking for Correction

The weather here in Beijing is getting more and more colder now,_because the autumn is coming. This week only has three workdays,_for this Thursday is China's traditional festival 'Mid-autumn', Mid Autumn Festival.  It is a time when family numbers members will gather together to celebrate the family reunion.  It, is also the time when we will eat moon cake ,which is regarded as mooncakes.  They symbolize the moon and family union.  ,I can not cannot wait to eat it be with my family; eating and enjoying the festival festivities.  Now, how I wish time could can go pass faster haha.

Diary-looking for correction

The weather here in Beijing is getting more and more cold now,because the autumn is coming. This week only has three workdays, because this Thursday is china's traditional festival 'Mid-autumn'. This means family members will gather together to celebrate it by eating moon cake ,which is regarded as moon and family union.I can not wait to eat it with my family and enjoy the festival now,I wish time could pass faster haha.

Although, saying The weather here in Beijing "is getting more and more cold" would be a correct way to say it. Most people would just say The weather here in Beijing "keeps getting colder".