The house where I stay during the holydays
Now, I am in holydays, so I have decided to go a house that my parents have in Santa Pola, a city near Alicante, in the east cost of Spain. My parents bought the house fifteen years ago and, since then; I have been going every year in the summer holydays. It is a small house, not bigger than 60 square meters. The thing I like most is that has a spacious terrace and is only a few meters far from the beach.
The main problem is that here I do not have an Internet connection. I neither have a smartphone, so I need to go to a bar or a restaurant with Wi-Fi to connect to internet.
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The house where I stay during the holidays holydays
Now, I am in holydays on summer vacation, so I have decided to go a house that my parents have in Santa Pola, a city near Alicante, in on the east coast of Spain. My parents bought the house fifteen years ago and since then I have been going every year in the summer holidays holydays. It is a small house, not bigger no more than 60 square meters. The thing I like most is that it has a spacious terrace and is only a few meters far away from the beach.
The main problem is that here I do not have an Internet connection. I neither don't have a smartphone either, so I need to go to a bar or a restaurant with Wi-Fi to connect to the internet.
Nice work, I can tell that you have studied English before :)
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The house where I stayed during the holidays
Now, I am in holydays, so on vacation and I have decided to go stay in a house that my parents had in Santa Pola, a city near Alicante, in the east coast of Spain. My parents bought the house it fifteen years ago. and, since then; For every year, I have had been going there every year in the summer vacation. holydays. It is a small house, not bigger than 60 sixty square meters. The thing I like most is that has a spacious terrace and is only a few meters far from the beach.
The main problem is that here I do not have any Internet connection. I Neither do I have a smartphone. Hence the so I need to go to a bar or a restaurant with Wi-Fi to connect to internet.
How idyllic and lucky you are!
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Thank you!
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I agree with all the corrections already made by others. I would just add that in the first sentence "I have decided to go a house ..." should be changed to "I have decided to go to THE house ...". The way you wrote it implies that your parents may have more than one house in Santa Pola. If they own only one, "the" is a more appropriate word.
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The house where I stay during the holidays
Now that I am on holiday I have decided to go a house that my parents have in Santa Pola, a city near Alicante, on the east cost of Spain. My parents bought the house fifteen years ago and since then I have been going every year in the summer holidays. It is a small house, not (much) bigger than 60 square meters. The thing I like most, is that has a spacious terrace and is only a few meters far from the beach.
The main problem is that here I do not have an Internet connection. I also don't have a smartphone, so I need to go to a bar or a restaurant with Wi-Fi to connect to internet.
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