又快要开学了。。。

Ugh, it's a bad day, it 's midnight now, but i can not fall asleep. You know, this is a strange world. There are a lot of things that can not be told, just be pulled into deep heart. It is so complicated...
Now I'll say something happier:
I have many dreams. One of these is to learn Spanish and French well. I hope I can speak as an local speaker!  I also hope I can improve my English speaking skills. I have made a plan for my summer holiday to learn English, Spanish and French before the holiday ended, but I failed. When I got home I forget it. It 's unbelieveble that I just played for the whole holiday. Oh my god! I wasted the best time.  
Now I have to sleep, and I will start my languages―learning journey! Fighting!

Green are suggestions.  Red are corrections.

In English, punctuation always comes immediately after the letter before, with no space between.  Then there is usually also a space after the punctuation mark. Sentences must be separate, not connected by commas.  The names of languages are Capitalized.

我你的英文不太错！我认为你的意思很明白。主要的问题是怎么用 《I》 和 《，》。你的《自然，你写的英文比我写的中文很好。