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Hot Weather These days are the hottest days in one year. In two weeks, the highest temperature has been over 40 degree almost everyday. I appreciate for the person who invented air-conditions. I wonder how our anciets lived without air-conditions. Or new technologies brings the hot weather? Although the weather is hot, I'd like to go climbing in weekends. The high plants keep me from the sunshine and enough oxygen makes me feel good. Sweating lets my body cooler. Sometimes I go to swim in a indoor swiming pool . I can't swim and have to use a swim ring. I like the feeling that the water floats me to refuse some of the gravitation. There are a lot fun in hot days. I like summer.

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Hot Weather

 

These days are the hottest days in one the year. In For two weeks, the highest temperature has been was over 40 degree almost everyday [understood from "for two weeks...] . I appreciate am grateful for the person who invented air-conditioning [The first person who invented modern air conditioning is Willis Carrier]. I wonder how our anciets ancestors lived without them air-conditions. Or new technologies brings the hot weather and now if they cause global warming?

Although the weather is hot, I'd still would like to go climbing in the weekends. The high plants Tall trees keep me from the sunshine in the shade and enough they give out plenty of oxygen. This makes me feel good. Sweating lets cools my body cooler. Sometimes I go to swim in a indoor swiming pool. . I can't swim and have to use a float swim ring. I like the bouyancy of the water to counteract the feeling of being pulled down by gravity. feeling that the water floats me to refuse some of the gravitation.

There are a lot is much fun in on hot days. I like summer.

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I consider people living in ancient times do not really need air conditioners very much . Cooler and comfortable in old times is expected  I believe . Too much air pollution like CO2 emission makes the weather humid and hot year by year  . I remember decades years ago when I was a child . I did not really think I need air conditioners . However, years later , everything changes , without airconditioning , I  hardly think in so hot climate . 

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Hot Weather

These days are the hottest days in one year (Suggestions: 'of the year' or 'this year'). In Over the past two weeks, the highest temperature has been over 40 degrees (we sometimes specify if celsius or fahrenheit as US uses fahrenheit) almost everyday. I appreciate for the person who invented air-conditions (air conditioning). I wonder how our anciets ancients lived ('ancients' does sound a little funny. People would usually say 'our predecessors' or the 'people lived in the olden days') without air-conditions (air conditioning). Or new technologies brings the hot weather? (I'm not sure what the meaning of this is)

Although the weather is hot, I'd like to go climbing in on the weekends. The high plants (tall trees, the tall vegetation) keep me (shade me) from the sunshine (sunlight) and enough (so much) oxygen makes me feel good. Sweating lets my body cooler (cools my body down). Sometimes I go to swim ('I go swimming' probably sounds more natural) in an indoor swiming pool . I can't swim and have to use a swim ring. I like the feeling that the water floats me to refuse some of the gravitation (This phrase sounds odd. Perhaps 'I like the almost weightless feeling of floating in the water').

There are a lot fun in hot days Hot days are a lot of fun. I like summer.

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I think the people in old days didn't need air-conditions. You'are right, the new technologies get the weather hotter. Bye the way, where're you living, I am in Hangzhou, it's damn hot!!

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