Si yo sento (¿Me siento o Yo Siento? It's not clear to me what you are trying to say here...) y escribo...

Apuesto que si yo sento y escribo, a continuación, sin pensar, una frase completa creceré desde el aire delgado. Como la frase anterior es! Eso es correcto. Una vez más. Bueno, esta frase está buscando un objetivo y no tengo ninguno. ¿Cómo pueden estas palabras hacer frases sin pensar para ayudar? ¿Es esto una broma, o simplemente una confusión grosera? No es necessario a decidir porque todo deba estar madura con errores para corregir. ¡Tengan un buen dia amigos! :^)

Hello John, It's been a while, eh? 
I tried to understand your paragraph, but it difficult since I don't know what kind of writing this is. Is it Poetry, or you are trying to write about something in particular?

In any case, there are certain words and expressions I don't quite follow, I higlighted them, but in general, It's confusing... If you feel like to, you can send me your english version, so that I can compare it with your spanish version and try to give you a closer approach to what you realy wanted. I could point out in that way your wrongs.

Hope to hear from you soon, Have a good day!

Cesar