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Walking in the City
I always have always enjoyed walking, even when I was a little boy. My mother usually told me that she didn´t needed to do any no sport exercise when I was a child. All she had to do was only has to be following me!
A few years ago, I started to make long rides having long hikes in the mountains. I really liked it. It was great to be in the middle midst of the nature. But, in a short time, However, soon I realized that missed something is amiss. I missed the buildings, the people and even the noise hustle and bustle of the city. Then Finally, I realised I was a city boy man. The Nature bores me!
I have been in a lot of to many cities around the world, and always walking through them. It's incredible to see how different the cities and their people who live in them are.
Walking in the city
I always have enjoyed walking, even when I was a little boy. My mother usually told me that she didn´t need to do any sport [I think you mean either "play any sports" or "do any exercise"] when I was a child. She only had to follow me!
A few years ago, I started to take long rides in the mountains. I really liked it. It was great to be in the middle of the nature. But soon I missed something. I missed the buildings, the people and even the noise of the city. It was then that ["It was then that" gives it a more literary sound, and it flows well when you're talking about something you suddenly realise.] I realised I was a city man. The Nature bored me!
I have been in a lot of cities around the world and walked through them. It´s incredible to see how different the cities and the people who live in them are.
Good job!
Walking in the city
I always have always enjoyed walking, even when since I was a little boy. My mother usually told me that she didn´t need to do any sport when I was a child. She only has had to be following me!
A few years ago, I started to make go on long rides in the mountains and I really liked it. It was great to be right in the middle midst of the nature. But, in a that short time, I missed was missing something. I missed the buildings, the people and even the noise of the city. Then, I realised I was a city man. The Nature bored me!
I have been in to a lot of cities around the world, walking through them (?). It´s incredible to see how different the cities are and the people who live in them are. (<--That can be right, but it sounds better there)
Good effort!
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