When I was a middle school student, I studied at a small school in a town. I always easily ranked among the top three in my class, perhaps due to the school's simple curriculum, or the lack of tough competition. But once I entered the city's best high school, things changed. I needed to study ten subjects at the same time and most of my classmates were very smart. I didn't realize how difficult circumstances would be. I felt, too, like I was drowning in sadness, having been separated from old friends. When eventually I got a very bad grade, it served as a wake-up call: I realized that a lot had changed, and I that I, too, would have to adapt. I needed to improve my grades, and so I immediately set some goals and made a plan. I studied hard and worked to find a new learning method which would better suit me. What's more, I got to know my classmates during our leisure time, in an effort to make new friends. All of this proved very effective. When I graduated from high school, I had achieved the second highest grade in my class, and had made a lot of friends. In our lives, we will encounter a variety of changes and challenges, and the best way to meet with them is always by endeavoring to improve ourselves.

Your composition was very good! I have made mostly stylistic & word choice changes, to make it sound a bit more "native". Keep up the good work!

你写的非常好！大多数的变化只是我自己喜好的风格变体，一点儿更地道的。真不错吧！加油！

It is so hard to get along with people around me!

It is so hard to get along with people around me! When I calm down and look at the people who should be on my side, I find that they always talk one way, but act another. Though I always try to repair our relationships, it doesn't work. I often don't even know what I've done wrong. Now, though, I feel tired, I don't want to do anything. The only good feeling I have during these days is knowing that I still have a real friend. Even if there is only one, that's enough!

Can you help me find out some any grammatical mistakes in grammer?

Today is the day (or "Now is the time") of for the world to improve the concept its understanding of autism. Autism is a whole life developing life-long developmental obstacle which can be attributed to the nervous system lose balance imbalances, affecting the ability normal functions of the brain. Sufferers are always diagnosed as children, as the symptoms appears before prior to 3 years old of age. and the patients are always children. The features of autism can describe into the deficience of include impaired social interaction ability, the difficulty with on verbal and non-verbal communication with language and non-language, abnormal behaviors, interesting (What do you mean by this?), and other activity limitations limited activities. Autism is fluent in present all around the world worldwide among children. This high incidence of a disease, which produces a huge effects on children and their families, communities and society as a whole.

Thanks!

Very understandable, good job!

Snowman

A few days ago, it was still very cold at my place. It was sunny, too, so my cousin and I made this snowman. Do you like it? Do you like winter or snow?

I'm glad to meet you!

Hello, everyone! I'm from China. My name is Amber. Right now, I'm studying English & Japanese. I think different languages each have their different charms. Of course, in addition to improving my speaking ability, I'd also like to make friends from a variety of countries  If anybody wants to improve their Mandarin or make friends with me, you're welcome to get in touch!