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House Warming Party Tonight, I'm going to a house warming party in my closest friend's. He and I are working together now. I didn't think I could meet such a nice person to be a life time friend in this age. But it's too far from our company. It takes about one and a half hours to get his home. I'm preparing some presents for him and his wife but I failed to buy it. It's just a washing-up liquid product (for dish washing) but good for hands. I also bought some bottles of wine but I thought buying only liquors didn't look good as a present for starting in a new house. :D

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House Warming Party
Tonight, I'm going to a housewarming party at my best friend's place. He and I work together. At my age I didn't think I could meet such a nice person who would become my lifetime friend.

But he lives so far from the company. It takes about one and a half hours to get to his home.
I wanted to make something nice as a present for him and his wife but I didn't get to do that. All I did was buy some dishwashing liquid that's gentle on the hands. I also bought a few bottles of wine but I thought bringing only alcohol as a present for a housewarming party didn't look very nice. :D

[Need to start writing in paragraphs. Koreans seem to write a new sentence on a new line. It looks funny this way in English.]

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House Warming Party

Tonight, I'm going to a house warming party inofmy closest friend's.
He and IWe are working together now these days.
I didn't think have never thought that I could meet such a nice person to be a my life time friend in at this age.

But it's However, he lives too far from our company. It takes about one and a half hours to get his home.
I'm preparing some presents for him and his wife. but I failed to buy it any. 
[You did buy some presents as you are talking about the presents that you bought in the following, right? ]
It's just a washing-up liquid product (for dish washing) but and good for hands.
I also bought some bottles of wine but I thought buying only liquors it didn't look good to buy only liquor as a present for starting in a new house. :D

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House Warming Party

Tonight, I'm going to a house warming party in my closest friend's. (Tonight I'm going to a house warming party at one of my closest friends.)
He and I are working together now. (This sentence is somewhat stange; My friend and I have worked together these days)
I didn't think I could meet such a nice person to be a life time friend in(at) this age.

But it's too far from our company. It takes about one and a half hours to get his home. (However, he lives too far from our company, it takes about an hour and a half to get to his home.)
I'm preparing some presents for him and his wife but I failed to buy it.
It's just a washing-up liquid product (for dish washing) but good for hands.
I also bought some bottles of wine but I thought buying only liquors didn't(wouldn't) look good as a present for starting in a new house. :D

 

Nice job MJ.  Try using However instead of But at the beginning of a sentence.  Also a tip when you use a contraction first say out loud the full version of the word and see if it sounds right.  For example "would not look good" or "did not look good" then "wouldn't look good" and "didn't look good"

 

I hope you are doing well!

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House Warming Party

Tonight, I'm going to a house warming party in of my closest friend's.
He and I are working together now.
I didn't never think thought ,I could meet such a nice person to will be a life time friend of mine at in this age.

But it's too far from our company. It takes about one and a half hours to get his home.
I'm preparing some presents for him and his wife but as I failed to buy it.
It's just a washing-up liquid product (for dish washing) but good for hands.
I also bought some bottles of wine but I thought buying only liquors didn't will not look good as a present for starting in a new house. :D

now is not required as you are using present continuous tense.

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