Today's event
My boss intended to buy a coffee from a vending machine.
Then,8 cans appeared for 100 yen!(List price:100 yen for a can)
Since I thought “It’s chance!”,I went to buy coffees from the vending machine immediately.
I put money(100 yen) and push the button with excite!
・・・No coffees appeard,and not back my money.(Cause unknown）
Thease events were miracle,but I don’t need my miracle.
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Today's event
My boss wanted to buy a coffee from a vending machine.
Then, 8 cans appeared for 100 yen!(List price:100 yen for a can)
Since I thought “This is my chance!”, I went to buy more coffees from the vending machine immediately.
I put in the money(100 yen) and excitedely pushed the button with excite!
... No coffee appeard, and I did not get my money back . (Cause unknown）
Thease These events were a miracle, but I don’t need my miracle.
This is really good. I corrected to make it sound more natural. : )
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Today's event
My boss intended to buy a coffee from a vending machine.
Then, 8 cans appeared(came out) for 100 yen! (List price:100 yen for a can)
Since I thought “It’s my chance!”, I went to buy coffees from the vending machine immediately.
I put money in (100 yen) and pushed the button with excitement!
・・・No coffees appeared, and I did not get back my money. (Cause unknown）
Thease events were miracles(anomalies), but I didn’t need my miracle.
Haha, I hope your boss gave you one of his!
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