Today's thing. Activities

Today, I made holes in had my ears pierced for the first time. because I really wanted to wear pierced earrings.  so I'm I am very happy! I didn't feel and felt no pain at all., when I made holes. It finished very quickly. The process was quick -  It took about only a few minutes. 1 A months later, I can take off the studs my first pierced earrings. I'm am looking forward to wear many kinds of earrings!

Then I went shopping after that. There are was a sale at in H&M. and I bought many outfits.  , so I'm satisfied! But, So satisfying!  However, I was very dismayed that I found had bought a one tops that I bought at full price last week. It is now at half price. [In the US, you can go an return it or ask for the difference in price!] marked down by 50%. I'm very shock!


Please check my English in a strict manner. strictly. I want to speak natural proper English. I hope Thanks for your help.

Today's thing.

Today, I made holes in my ears for the first time. This is literally correct, you did make holes in your ears (hehehe), but we use the verb to pierce to describe this special or specific type of hole, for this purpose

I really wanted to wear pierced earrings, so I'm very happy!

I didn't feel pain, when I made holes. I didn't feel the pain, when I made the holes.

It finished very quickly. I finished (the piercing) very quicky..... or maybe... It (the process of piercing) was over quickly.

It took about only a few minutes.

1 months later, I can take off my first pierced earrings. One month (singular)...

I'm looking forward to wear many kinds of earrings! I'm looking forward to wearing..

Then I went shopping after that.

There are sale in H&M. There was a sale.... what you described happened in the past.

I bought many outfits, so I'm satisfied!

But, I found one tops that I bought last week marked down by 50%. But, I found one top....... one is singluar so the word is top not tops.  ....that I bought last week that was marked down by 50%.

I'm very shock! No - either I was in shock!! ......or............ I was shocked!


Please check my English strictly. I want to speak natural English. I hope yor help.

:-)

Alex