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我买一个笔 二天前我买一个很美笔从中国,我买这从网路。 我爱中国的艺。一艺人做我的笔。 Two days ago I bought a really beautiful pen from china. I bought it from the Internet. I love Chinese art . a Chinese artist made it.

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我买了一个支笔

>> "了" es 动态助词-aspecto verbal, "了" indica que la acción ya ha terminado

>> "支" es 量词-clasificador, "一支笔" es una frase idiomática

 

二两天前我从中国买了一个支很美的笔从中国,

>> "二" es igual a "两", pero "两天" es una frase idiomática

>> aquí se usa el orden Sustantivo-lugar(从中国)-Verbo-Objeto

>> se puede omitir "的" en "美女","美名","美语", pero no decimos "美笔"

 

我买这从网路。 (puedes decir "我在网上买的/这是我在网上买的")

 

我爱中国的艺术。 (艺术=arte)

 

一艺人做我的笔。 (puedes decir "我的笔是一位艺人做的")

 

Por cierto, "la práctica hace al maestro" significa "熟能生巧" en chino.

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我买了一支笔

两天前我从中国买了一支很漂亮的笔,我是从网上买的。

我爱中国的艺术。我的笔是一位中国艺人做的。

Two days ago I bought a really beautiful pen from china. I bought it from the Internet. I love Chinese art . a Chinese artist made it.

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you didn't translate it yourself right?it's not good
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我买一个笔

 

两天前我从中国买了一根很美丽的笔,我是从网路买的。 我爱中国的艺术。我的笔是由一个艺人制作的。

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我买了一个支笔

二两天前我从中国买了一个支很美的笔从中国,我是通过网络买的这从网路。 我爱中国的艺术。这支笔是一个艺人做的我的笔。

Two days ago I bought a really beautiful pen from china. I bought it from the Internet. I love Chinese art . a Chinese artist made it.

 

 

Sometimes you'd better write the sentences with : sometime in somewhere do something . For example : i will go to the supermarket tomorrow __明天我要去超市购物。It's just my opinion , hope it can help you .

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