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my cute cat baby About 2 weeks ago ,when i finished work and was waiting the bus , i looked at a cat baby behind a tree.He is so small, just a bit more than my fist.He is white but very dirty,looks like very pathetic and weak.At that time,i can't bear,my heart told me i should take him to my home Then i took him home.He looks like very timid,aways trembling.First i washed to him,he became to clean and beautiful.And i gave him some milk and fish can but he just had a little.I have no experience to fed on a pet,so i called my friend(she has a dog,two tortoise).my friend give my some suggestions i also queryed some knowledges online.Gradually the baby likes me and my home.i give him a name.it's 帅哥（means handsome boy).oh,i forgot tell u,he is a boy and looks like really handsome and cute,his english name is Jeremy .Now he became more and more bigger and stronger.everyday when i backed home,he licks my crus.just as say"hello" but sometimes i am a little annoyed.cause he is too naughty,often holds my my slippers around the house. I thank god for giving me such a gift.he brings a lof of fun and moved I love him very much,now I treat it as my son I now see the truth : raise animals. experience and knowledge is not enough. The most important thing is love. Finally, I hope all people can love animals, because animals are human's good friends

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my cute kitten

About two weeks ago ,when I finished work and was waiting the bus, I saw a kitten behind a tree. He was so small, hardly bigger than my fist. He was white but very dirty, and looked pathetic and weak. At that time,i can't bear, my heart told me I should take him to my home.

So I took him home. He looked very timid, always trembling. First I washed to him and he became to clean and beautiful. Then I gave him some milk and fish from a can, but he only had a little. I have no experience to fed on a of feeding pets, so I called my friend (she has a dog and two tortoises). My friend gave me some suggestions. I also looked up some information online.

Gradually the kitten came to likes me and my home. I've given him a name: it's 帅哥（which means "handsome boy").  Oh, I forgot to tell you, he is a boy and looks like really handsome and cute. His English name is Jeremy. Soon he became more and more bigger and stronger.  Every day when I return home, he licks my [crus??] as if to say "hello", but sometimes I am a little annoyed with him because he is too naughty, and often takes my my slippers around the house.

I thank God for giving me such a gift. He brings a lot of fun and [moved??]. I love him very much, now I treat him as my son.

I now see the truth: raise animals!  Experience and knowledge are not enough. The most important thing is love.

Finally, I hope all people can love animals, because animals are humanity's good friends.


Awww, nice!  I hope my corrections are clear. :)

By the way, when we become familiar with an animal (or sometimes, even an object), we'd use "he" or "she" to make the relationship more personal.
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What a kind girl and a sweet story. Cats are my favourite, although we do not have a cat now. I think you gained a great friend and learnt a lot from your experiences. I agree love is the most important thing above experience or knowledge. Love is the greatest of all things and it inspires people to do great things and changes lives.
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I love animal, mostly dog. I think they are so cute. by the way, your cat is so cute. where did you get it? it isn't like from the street. it's very beautiful.
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also had a cat for some time back and had to Dearle the care of a lady who owned a large house in the country since I moved from Bogota-Colombia hometown to a call within the same country Villavicencio. I can tell you also of great responsibility and love must have with a pet .. Well, first do not know if you already have a site with sand to make their needs, it is indispensable, on the other hand you get a ball of wool or cloth in order to play and sharpen its claws without damaging your furniture and finally give him enough food just as it can get sick from obesity ahhh, not so long as you keep your hair flat and may deteriorate. for the rest, styling products etc exixte. watch go to the vet for a review by parasites every two to three months ok. take care and good luck with "Beautiful Boy" ..!
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Good on you for saving little Jeremy. Sometimes it's those spur of the moment decisions, when we just listen to your heart without thinking too much, that work out the best. He looks cute with his big blue eyes, but with enough of a wild side to still be able to catch mice. 你的小猫跟你可爱一样 ;-)

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