First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Anna,I'm twenty eight years old;
My english is very bad, so I want to learn more English more with in the work.
I hope I with more friends learn together can make a friend with you, and learn English together

Note:what do you want to say in yellow highlighted sentence?

Don't give up, An. Nice to meet you.

Today

Hello, everyone, this one is my first conposition composition. I'm a senior student .My mother language is Chinese. I want to lean learn English. My English is poor, but I want to improve my English level, especially english the spoken language. I hope someone can help me. And, my chinese can also, If you want to lean learn Chinese, I can help you more or less.Thank you!

Note:

1. Blue highlights are correct form. Some of blues are written to make your sentences beautiful.

2. Before read marks (句号，逗号，等等） add no space. After marks add space. After marks letters are capitalized.

3. For "and, my chinese can also", I couldn't understand what you wanted to say. If you made it clearly, maybe we can understand better what you want to say.

Keep fighting!!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and sports too. I want to communicate with others from another country to improve my English.