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A day I'll never forget. My humorous writing in English. I've never told anyone this story. It took place in distant 80 th year. At that time I was working on my secret project, about which I can not tell. So, It was a warm September day. At about 12 am I got a call from my friend Freddy and he asked me to come to his house. He did not say why, but I have done what he asked. When I arrived to his house, I found out that he had organized cocacol party at which all my friends were waiting for me. We drank cola and I passed out. I was awakened by the bright sunlight. I opened my eyes and saw a beautiful rainbow. It amazed me with its extraordinary beauty, similar rainbow before I have never seen. I omitted my eyes and saw the high alpine mountains. On the tops of the mountains were standing proud and beautiful mountain's goats. On a meadow, I noticed a beautiful purple cow Milka. I thought that these are only in the advertisements but I was wrong. Left of me were standing all my friends. They all smiling and congratulating me happy birthday. It turns out that while I was sleeping, they were took me to this wonderful place. It was the most wonderful and unforgettable my birthday party. We had fun, played sang karaoke and drank Coke. This day I will never forget.

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A day that I'll never forget.

 

My humorous fantasy writing in English. [I prefer, "Trying my hand at fantasy writing in English"]


I've have never told anyone about this story.


It took place in a distant time, eighty years from now. 80 th year [I really don't understand this sentence, so I am guessing]. At that time I was working on my secret project, about which I cannot say. can not tell. So, It was a warm September day [I prefer, "a warm day in September"]. At about 12 am Around midnight, I got a call from my friend Freddy, came.  and He asked me to come go to his house. He did not say why. , but I have done what did as he asked.


When I arrived to On arriving at his house, I found out that he had organized a Coca-Cola cocacol party at which where all my friends were waiting for me. We drank cola Coke and I passed out.


I was awakened by the bright sunlight. I opened my eyes and saw a beautiful rainbow. It was amazed me with by its extraordinary beauty., similar rainbow before I Never have I never seen one before with such pulchritude [This is a big word but I don't like to repeat "beauty" again].  Then I omitted my eyes and saw the high alpine mountains. On the tops of the mountains top, were standing proud, was a herd of and beautiful mountain's goats. On a the meadow, I noticed a beautiful purple cow named Milka. I thought that this sort of scenery appeared these are only in the advertisements. but I guess I was wrong. All my friends were standing on my left side, of me were standing all my friends. They all smiling and congratulating me on my happy birthday. It turneds out that while I was sleeping, they were took me to this wonderful place. It was the most wonderful and unforgettable my birthday party that I ever had. We had fun, we played, sang karaoke and drank more Coke. This is a day that I will never forget.

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Oh! I forgot put" :D" at the end of my sentence! I just was kidding! :D
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wow! what a nice birthday you had! maybe I do it for one of my best friend in future! thank you!

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