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Smoking I am a light smoker. I smoke about ten cigarettes per day. Thinking needs to take a break. I think that smoking has the work which deepens thinking. “Columbo” of the Los Angeles city police department often smoking a cigar. “Sherlock Holmes “also was puffing at his pipe. Would you like one cigarette at taking a break?

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Smoking

I am a light smoker.
I smoke about ten cigarettes per day.
taking a break helps thinking.
I think that smoking deepens thinking.
“Columbo” of the Los Angeles city police department often smokes a cigar.
“Sherlock Holmes “also was puffing at his pipe.
Would you like one cigarette when taking a break?

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If every body likes her/him healthy body ,shouldn't damage it . I prefer playing chess ,drinking a glass of water and so on at the break time ..
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Smoking

I am a light smoker.
I smoke about ten cigarettes per day.
Thinking needs to take a break.

(文法的に前の文には間違いがありませんが。私には意味がちょっと分からなくて、2個の堪能な文を挙げます。意味がかなり違うので気をつけてください。)

Sometimes I need a break from thinking.

Taking a break helps thinking. 


I think that smoking has the work which deepens thinking.
“Columbo” of the Los Angeles city police department often smokesing a cigar.
“Sherlock Holmes“ also was puffing at his pipe.
Would you like one cigarette at when taking a break?

 

英語が上手ですね。

 

私は一服も吸った事がありませんから、個人的に言えないけど、これは違うと思います。タバコを吸う事は思考能力を悪化するそうです。多分、禁断症状で考えにくくなってこういうふうに思うかなと思っています。

 

勿論、人が吸うかどうかは個人的な決断ですから、判断しません。

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I hate smoking, I cannot imagine how you can stand the smoke of cigarettes in some warm days or in humid weather,imagination about that people who smoke, should breath cigarette smoke in a warm or humid weather drive me crazy,and give me chock feeling! oh!my daddy smoke cigarettes a lot!
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you should quit smoking. In the long term, you will be more healthy that now. Believe me

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