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What's for me the magic of travelling [someone here to correct my English, please! :P] I live in a small town, and I've always liked it. It's safe, you can go anywhere without anything happening to you... and I used to like it. "I used to like it" because I realised that depending on the knowledge you have of the world, the idea of "beauty" changes radically. Some months ago, I travelled abroad and each time I stepped into a different city, I found myself amazed with all the new things I could see, the different cultures I could be into, all the people I could meet... and when I came back home, I felt that everything was the same, like I'd never left. The streets with the same shops seemed to had been freezed until I came back, my bedroom was waiting me in the same conditons I had left it... no radical change at sight. I love my city though, after all, it's home, besides I think that even if I lived in the prettiest city ever, eventually I would find it a little bit dull, because everything insted of being special would be an everyday thing. It was a strange feeling, like the trip itself had been a dream... and that's when I discovered the magic of travelling.

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I wouldn't worry about the spelling of travelling vs traveling. Both ways are acceptable-- it's just that one is more British/Australian and the other is more American. He presentado una corección para tu. Creo que tu Ingles es generalmente muy bueno. Sólo había unos pocos errores. Dime si tienes algunas preguntas sobre mis comentarios.
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What's for me the magic of travelling [someone here to correct my English, please! :P]

I live in a small town, and I've always liked it. It's safe, you can go anywhere without anything happening to you... and I used to like it.
"I used to like it" because I realised that depending on the knowledge you have of the world, the idea of "beauty" changes radically.
Some months ago, I travelled abroad and each time I stepped into a different city, I found myself amazed with all the new things I could see, the different cultures I could be into experience/become immersed in/participate in ("be into" seems a bit odd here), all the people I could meet... and when I came back home, I felt that everything was the same, like I'd never left. The streets with the same shops seemed to had been freezed have been frozen until I came back, my bedroom was waiting for me in the same conditons I had left it... no radical change at in sight.
I love my city though, after all, it's home, besides I think that even if I lived in the prettiest city ever, eventually I would find it a little bit dull, because everything instead of being special would be an everyday thing.
It was a strange feeling, like the trip itself had been a dream... and that's when I discovered the magic of travelling.

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Thanks! :)
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The only things you need to correct are the spelling of traveling, it has one L, and freezed needs to be changed to frozen. (:

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