Corrections · 8
You have two good corrections. So I am doing it differently so that you can compare and learn the different ways of expressing the same thing.
Played Windsurfing
I went to nearby ocean to play windsurfeding today at a nearby ocean. Since there was almost no wind it was windless, it was I had difficult to propel. move forward. The first time, I played the wind was too strong for a beginner to control well for beginner, and now today, the second time around, it was way too much weaker today. Yup, 1 Yes, that's the way of nature! [I prefer, "that's the way the cookie crumbles!"] Hopefully there will come to good condition for the third time's a charm.
1. This is slang. Normally I do not encourage using slang in formal essays. However, in this case, you are doing a soliloquy, a form of speech and so it is okay.
Played Windsurfing
I went to the nearby ocean to play go windsurfing today. Since there was almost no wind, I had difficulty to moving forward. The first time I played went windsurfing, the wind was made it too strong to control the surfboard well for a beginner. And the second this time, the wind was too much weakertoday. Yes, that's the nature! Hopefully there will come to be good/better conditions for the third time.
{Sorry I should have made the following change in my correction above: switch the order of "too much weak" to "much too weak"}
Played windsurfing
I went to the nearby ocean to play windsurfing today. Since there was almost no wind, I had difficulty to moving forward. The first time I played windsurfed, the wind was made it too strong to control the [NOUN] well for a beginner. And the second this time, the wind was too much weakertoday. Yes, that's the nature! Hopefully there will come to be good conditions for the third time.
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