About Japanese school
I have be able to taken a summer vacation for a long time.
My school will start from 27 AUG,and students will come back again to my class.
In Japan,one elementary school teacher have to teach many things,of course all subject.
(Japanese,Math,Art,Society,Music,Science,English,P.E.Home economics,Period for integrated study)
We teach some habit,for example how to using a chopsticks,communicating for people of superior,cleaning a classroom by themselves.
yes,they have to clean a classroom after a lunch time or after the school.
A lunch is offered by school.A nutritionist think about the nutrition balance of a school lunch.
So we can eat it safety and nutritious.
One class has up to 35children per class. It is so noisy.
So almost japanese teacher should be carefully their situation.
I want to know about the school in your country.
Would you tell me it?
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About Japanese school
I have been able to taken a long summer vacation for a long time.
My school work will start again from 27 AUG, and students will come back again to my class.
In Japan, one elementary school teacher have has (it is third person singular so the verb have has a form for it has) to teach many things, of course in all subject.
(Japanese,Math,Art,Society,Music,Science,English,P.E.Home economics,Period for integrated study)
We teach (what?) the students some habit cultural habits, for example how to using use (after "to" the verb should be in infinitive) a (no need for a because chopsticks is plural) chopsticks, communicating for people of superior with people who are superior to them, cleaning how to clean a classroom by themselves...
yes,they have to clean a their (the classroom belongs to the students in a way) classroom after a (you don't use a/an in front of breakfast, lunch and dinner in this context) lunch time or after the (no need for it) school.
A lunch is offered by the (here it is necessary to add the because you introduce the school as an institution) school. A nutritionist think decides about the nutrition balance of a the school lunch.
So we can eat it safety healthy and nutritious.
One class has up to 35 children per class (you already said on the beginning of the sentence that it is one class that you are talking about - one class and per class have same meaning in this context). It is so noisy.
So almost every (or you can say almost all) japanese teachers (plural) should be carefully (carefully is an adverb and in this case you talk about people who do some action which means you have to use the adjective careful) their situation(?) (you can say "with the class" because a situation is taken as one-time happening and Japanese teachers have to be careful with the class all the time while they work).
I want to know about the school system in your country.
Would you like to tell me about it?
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先生、こんばんは。
さき私の作文をコメントしてくださって、ありがとうございます。：）
先生にメッセージを送る権限はないから、ここで回復します。
私は日本に着いたら、向こうの先生は広島駅へ迎えに来てくださいます。それから学校の寮を案内します。私は一人で空港のバスを乗って、駅に行きます。到着する時は夜ですから、とても不便です。
初対面とはいえ、この頃Eメールで話したこともありました。私の名前などはもう知っていますから、わざわざ自分紹介をする必要はないだと思いますが。先生はどう思いますか。
そして、学校は女子大学ですから、先生や友達同士はほとんど女性だと思います。私はお茶や中国の伝統的な切り紙細工や青花瓷の花柄のアクセサリーをお土産としてどうですか。酒は水ですから重いです。お菓子はほかの物と一緒に箱に入れると壊れやすいのではないでしょうか。
また、迎えに来る先生と初めて会う時にお土産を差し上げますか。その時に荷物は多いから、先生とも持って行くのもとても不便だと思います。
ところで、「型にはめすぐず」というのはどういう意味ですか。「型にこだわらない」という意味ですか。辞典には探せないから、ちょっと教えてもらいませんか。
それでは、お願い申し上げします。（^人^）
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Sure~ I will message you right now. :)
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