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The story of my new heater
Good Morning everybody,
Today I got a new heater. I bought it on the internet.
I had to take a day off from work, and for what? It was because of the delivery service, which wasn't able to tell me the delivery time.
This morning at a quater past seven, my mobile phone rings, and they told me that they will deliver within the next hour. At a quater past eight, the heater was in my flat. Now I took my day off (umsonst/for nothing???). I was a little bit annoyed. (ärgerlich ist das schon).
The good news is that today is fantastic weather, sunny and it's going to be 33 (degrees???). However, tomorrow it is supposed to be bad weather with a lot of rain and only 20 to 23 (degrees?). So I will at least enjoy that last wonderful, sunny day. (diesen vorerst letzten schönen, sonnigen Tag).
Omg - I forgot so many words that I wrote them in German, so that you would understand what I tried/(wanted) to say :-D.
Thank you for the correction and for helping!
Hallo, Narnja, Ja, dein Wetter heute ist schöner als unser Wetter. Hitze in den USA dauert mit Temperaturen von fast 40 Grad an Die Hitzewelle im Zentrum und im Osten der USA. Glücklicherweise gibt es hier funktionierende Klimaanlagen. Viele Grüße aus dem wilden Westen!
The story of my new heater
Good Morning everybody,
Today I got a new heater. I bought it in on the internet.
Because of the delivery service, which wasn´t able to tell me (eine ungefähre??) the exact delivery time, I had to take a free day off of work and for what?
This morgen morning at a quarter past seven, my mobile phone rings, and they told me that they will deliver within the next hour. At a quarter past eight the heater was in my flat. Now I took my day off for nothing (umsonst/for nothing???). That was a little bit annoying (ärgerlich ist das schon).
The good news are is, that today is the weather is fantastic weather and sunny, and it´s going to be 33 degrees (degrease???). Up to Tomorrow it should be bad weather with a lot of rain and only 20 to 23 degrees (degrease?). So I will enjoy that this last wonderful, sunny day at least. (diesen vorerst letzten schönen, sonnigen Tag).
Omg - I missed so many words! Because of this I wrote it in German, so that you would know, what I tried to say :-D.
Thank you for the correction and for your help!
Notizen
1) Das Substantiv "Internet" soll großgeschrieben sein. Das geht auch für Sprachen.
2) Grad = "degrees" auf Englisch
3) "degrease" bedeutet "Fett abnehmen". Es klingt auch nicht wie das Wort "degrees". Das S in "degrease" ist kurzer als das S in "degrees".
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