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A Little Trip I finished my little trip recently. Firstly, I traveled by train from Shanghai to Guilin, Guangxi province, and went to Yangshuo by bus then. Drifting on Yulong River and Lijiang River is very interesting and exciting. The beauty of the scenery along the rivers attracted me. And there are karst caves in Guilin. They are amazing! Secondly, I went to Yunnan province. Because of the bad weather, I only have been to Kunming, Dali, Lijiang and Shangri-La. The ancient towns in Dali, Lijiang and Shangri-La are very similar. The most interesting things is riding bicycle from Dali ancient town to Xizhou, which is one of the birthplace of Bai nationality culture in Dali. And I met many interesting persons when riding on Yunnan-Tibet road. Most of them are riding bicycle to Tibet! But in Shangri-La I am impressed with one thing about Tibetan custom: water burial. When there was a Tibetan passed away in the town, they would cut the corpse into 108 pieces and throw them into the river to feed fishes. So I am afraid to eat roast fishes in Shangri-La~ Finally, I went to my grandmother’s house and finished this little trip. To sum up, it is a very interesting trip!

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Your English is really good, and your trip sounds like it was a lot of fun!
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A Little Trip

I finished my little trip recently.
First, I traveled by train from Shanghai to Guilin, Guangxi province, and then went to Yangshuo by bus. Drifting on Yulong River and Lijiang River was very interesting and exciting. The beauty of the scenery along the rivers attracted me. I also saw the karst caves in Guilin, which were amazing!
After that, I went to Yunnan province. Because of the bad weather, I only went to Kunming, Dali, Lijiang, and Shangri-La. The ancient towns in Dali, Lijiang, and Shangri-La are very similar. It was very interesting to ride bikes from Dali ancient town to Xizhou, which is one of the birthplace of Bai nationality culture in Dali. I met many interesting people when riding on Yunnan-Tibet road. Most of them were riding their bicycles to Tibet! In Shangri-La, I was impressed with one thing about Tibetan custom: water burial. When a Tibetan passed away in the town, they would cut the corpse into 108 pieces and throw it into the river to feed fishes. So I was afraid to eat the roast fishes in Shangri-La~
Finally, I went to my grandmother’s house and finished this little trip. To sum up, it was a very interesting trip!

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I wish i can do the same some day. I really wana be in china
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wow~ fantastic view !!

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