我的朋友生日。
今天是我最好朋友的 二十岁 生日。 她是牙买加人。 我认识她八年了。
在牙买加，我们会向过生日的男孩或者女孩身上扔面粉，虽然其他地方的人可能不会这么做。
牙买加人会开派对来庆祝他们的生日，我们还有我们自己的传统的"生日歌。
过生日的男孩或者女孩会从家人和朋友那里获得很多礼物。然而，他们在英国没有扔面粉的习惯，而只是开开派对或者和朋友外出游玩。
What I wanted to say.
Today is my best friends 20th birthday. She is Jamaican, I have known her for 8 years. In Jamaica we throw flour on birthday boys and girls but some people may not do so. Jamaicans would hold parties for their birthdays. Birthday boys and girls usually receive presents from their parents and friends. However, they do not share the custom of throwing flour in England, instead, they would just hold some parties or go out with friends.
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我的朋友生日。
今天是我最要好朋友的二十岁生日。她是牙买加人，我认识她已经八年了。
在牙买加，我们会向过生日的男孩或者女孩身上扔面粉，但是虽然其他地方的人可能不会这么做。
牙买加人会开派对来庆祝他们的生日，我们还有我们自己的传统的"生日歌"。
过生日的男孩或者女孩会从家人和朋友那里获得很多礼物。然而，因为他们在英国没有扔面粉的习惯，所以而只是开开派对或者和朋友外出游玩。
在牙买加过生日很隆重，大家很友好，很让人羡慕!
What I wanted to say.
Today is my best friends 20th birthday. She is Jamaican, I have known her for 8 years. In Jamaica we throw flour on birthday boys and girls but some people may not do so. Jamaicans would hold parties for their birthdays. Birthday boys and girls usually receive presents from their parents and friends. However, they do not share the custom of throwing flour in England, instead, they would just hold some parties or go out with friends.
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恩，不同的文化，有意思。
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very good=特别好（tie4bie2hao3）is wrong,
very good=特别好（te4bie2hao3）is right
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very good=特别好（tie4bie2hao3）
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very good
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