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Shiraz I'll never forget you! If you visit Iran never forget to visit Shiraz and its wonderful monuments. Today is the last day of my stay in Shiraz and I am going to go to Isfahan- another wonderful city, but I have already missed this wonderful city and all its beautiful places. :) This is definitely not the first time that I am here in Shiraz but each time I discover more about this city. The people are very friendly and helpful, the foods are gorgeous and the weather is warm but pleasant (specially in spring). I think it is a small portion of heaven on earth. Visiting different places like Baghe Eram (Eram Garden), Naarenjestan Museum, Afif-Abad Garden, Tomb of Hafiz and Sa'di ( the Iranian poets), Arge Karim Khan, Vakil Bazar (mall), Delgosha Garden is what makes me excited each time. Everyone who travels to Iran must visit Persepolis (TAKHT-E JAMSHID), the center of the great Persian Empire and ceremonial capital of the Achaemenians (Persian Hakhamanish). Each time I visit PERSEPOLIS I try the imagine this place in the era of the kings. :) Anyway I am leaving this city in 2 or 3 hours :( but I am so happy that I will visit Isfahan one more time; another wonderful city in Iran. One of my best friend is waiting for me to arrive there. I am so happy these days. ;) I put a beautiful picture of Baghe Eram here for you to enjoy. :)

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Here are just a couple of additions to Craig's very good correction: 

 

Shiraz I'll never forget you!

If you visit Iran don't forget never forget to visit Shiraz and its wonderful monuments.

Today is the last day of my stay in Shiraz and I am going to go to Isfahan- another wonderful city, but I already miss have already missed this wonderful city and all  its beautiful places...

 

Its a well written piece.  I miss Shiraz, too, including all the places you mention, as well as the quiet and simple beauty of Vakil Mosque next to the bazaar.


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Shiraz I'll never forget you!

If you visit Iran never forget to visit Shiraz and its wonderful monuments.

Today is the last day of my stay in Shiraz and I am going to go to Isfahan- another wonderful city, but I have already missed this wonderful city and all of its beautiful places. :)

This is definitely not the first time that I am here in Shiraz but each time I discover more about this city.

(This isn't the first time that I've visited Shiraz, but every time I come here, I discover something new/else.)

 

The people are very friendly and helpful, the food is gorgeous and the weather is warm but pleasant (especially in spring)(Especially for exceptionally, "more than anything else", Specially for a person or purpose with intent). I think it is a small portion of heaven on earth.

(apparently, "heaven and earth" don't have capitals, I think they ought hehe)

 

Visiting different places like Baghe Eram (Eram Garden), Naarenjestan Museum,

Afif-Abad Garden, Tomb of Hafiz and Sa'di (the Iranian poets), Arge Karim Khan, Vakil Bazar (mall), Delgosha Garden is what makes me excited each time.

Everyone who travels to Iran must visit Persepolis (TAKHT-E JAMSHID), the centre ("center" is American) of the great Persian Empire and ceremonial capital of the Achaemenians (Persian Hakhamanish).

Each time I visit PERSEPOLIS I try to imagine this place in the era of the kings. :)

Anyway I am leaving this city in 2 or 3 hours :( but I am so happy that I will visit Isfahan one more time; another wonderful city in Iran.

One of my best friends (My best frienD, or one of *many* best friendS) is waiting for me to arrive there. I am so happy these days. ;)

I put a beautiful picture of Baghe Eram here for you to enjoy. :)

 

And enjoy it, I did.

As well as enjoying your notebook entry.

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Yea, nothing is like what it used to be :)) Take care.
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@Vahid, I was there about one month ago and the weather was much better. ;)
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I was in Shiraz two weeks ago. It was but wonderful! Jahan-nama garden, Afif-Abad, Khaaju, and last not least: Persepolis! And guess what? I was in Isfahan last week! It was quite hot out there; moreover, Zayande-roud was totally dried out! Not even a single drop of water! Ah, such a shame. Anyway, safe trip.

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