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Respect to the eternal moment of the here an now A story of an Indian Guru: He lived with his all students in a place somewhere out of the town. All disciples have been ordered (they had to?) to live with him under his training. One day a man came and asked: "How could you get to this power of healing others at a glance (by a look?)? If I will be your disciple, which spiritual exercise we have to practice during all these years I have to be with you? What we should do during the day?" The master Says: "we do exercise in the morning. Then we eat breakfast. After that we work till lunch. We eat launch. After taking little bit rest, we work, and we sleep at night." The student says: "Nooooo impossible!!! We do each of these tasks and chores but we haven`t your power." Guru says: "you never do these like we do. You are eating breakfast, working, doing fun (recreation), while you think about other things. But while eating breakfast we think of just eating! We think of working, while we work. So you never receive any energy! But we receive all the energies of the nature and with giving just small limited to the patients they will be cured."

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I rewrote this story after Jeff`s correction:

 

Gratitude of eternal moment Still doesn't make sense.

 

A story of an Indian Guru:

 

A guru and his disciples lived in a place somewhere outside of town. One day a man came and asked,

 

"What miraculous power of healing you have just by giving a glance at the sick? If I become As your disciple, which what kind of spiritual exercises will we I be practising with you? What will we be doing in the day?"

 

The master replied: "We exercise in the morning. We have breakfast. Then we work till lunch. Afterwards we rest for awhile before we work again. During the night, we sleep!"

 

The student-to-be was astounded, "What? We do all these chores daily but we do not attain have any powers like yours!"

 

"This is because you never do things like we do. When you eat breakfast, you think not of eating. When you work, your mind is elsewhere; even when you are having fun! By not concentrating, you will never receive any energy from the natural surrounding. Until you are able to absorb and impart them energies from nature, the sick will never be cured by you."

 

This is further being polished and corrected since there are no distractions from the correction marks.

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Respect to the eternal moment of the here an now What are you trying to say here.  I don't understand.

 

A story of an Indian Guru:

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"How could you get to this What miraculous power of healing you have just by giving a glance at the sick? thers at a glance (by a look?)?  If I will become your disciple, which kind of spiritual exercises will we be practising we have to practice during all these years I have to be with you? What will we should be doing in  during the day?"

The master replied, says: "We do exercise in the morning. We eat have breakfast. After that Then we work till lunch. We eat launch. Afterwards we taking little bit rest for awhile before we work again.  , and we sleep at During the night we sleep."

The student-to-be was astounded, "What? says: "Nooooo impossible!!! We do each of all these tasks and chores daily but we haven`t your do not have any power like yours!"

Guru says: "you This is because you never do these things like we do. When you are eating breakfast, you think not of eating.  When you work, your mind is elsewhere even when you are having ing, doing fun! (recreation), while you think about other things.


But while eating breakfast we think of just eating!
We think of working, while we work.

By not concentrating, So you will never receive any energy! But we receive all the energies of the nature from the natural surrounding.  Until you are able to absorb and impart energies from nature,  and with giving just small limited to the patients they sick will never be cured by you."

 

1.  This is unnneeded and superflouous since it it is not central to the story; therefore long winded.

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Respect to the eternal moment of the here an now.

A story of an Indian Guru:
He lived with his all students in a place somewhere out of the town. All the disciples have been were ordered (they had to?) to live with him under his spiritual training. One day a man came and asked:
"How could  did you attain get to this power of healing others at with a glance (by a look?)?
If I were to become will be your disciple, which spiritual exercise would we have to practice during all thee years together I have to be with you? What we should we do during the day?"

The master said: "we do exercise in the morning. Then we eat breakfast. After that we work till lunch. We eat launch lunch. After taking a little bit of rest, we work and then sleep at night."

The student said: "Nooooo impossible!!! We do each do these tasks and chores but we haven't attained your power."

The Guru said: "you never do these like we do. You are eating breakfast, working, having fun (recreation), while you think about other things.
But while eating breakfast we think of just eating!
We think of working, while we work.
So you never receive any energy! But we receive all the energies of the nature and with giving just a small limited amount to the patients they will be cured."

 

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this one is after Kjo`s correction: Respect the eternal moment of here and now. A story of an Indian Guru: He lived with his all students in a place somewhere out of town. All the disciples were ordered to live with him under his spiritual training. One day a man came and asked: "How did you attain this power of healing others with a glance ? If I were to become your disciple, which spiritual exercise would we have to practice during all these years together? The master said: "we do exercise in the morning. Then we eat breakfast. After that we work till lunch. We eat lunch. After taking a little bit of rest, we work and then sleep at night." The student said: "Nooooo impossible!!! We each do these tasks and chores but we haven't attained your power." The Guru said: "you never do these like we do. You are eating breakfast, working, having fun, while you think about other things. But while eating breakfast we think of just eating! We think of working, while we work. So you never receive any energy! But we receive all the energies of nature and with giving just a small limited amount to the patients they will be cured."
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I rewrote this story after Jeff`s correction: Gratitude of eternal moment A story of an Indian Guru: A guru and his disciples lived in a place somewhere outside of town. One day a man came and asked: "What miraculous power of healing you have just by giving a glance at the sick? If I become your disciple, which kind of spiritual exercises will we be practising with you? What will we be doing in the day?" The master replied: "We exercise in the morning. We have breakfast. Then we work till lunch. Afterwards we rest for awhile before we work again. During the night we sleep." The student -to-be was astounded, "What? We do all these chores daily but we do not have any power like yours!" This is because you never do things like we do. When you eat breakfast, you think not of eating. When you work, your mind is elsewhere even when you are having fun! By not concentrating, you will never receive any energy from the natural surrounding. Until you are able to absorb and impart energies from nature, the sick will never be cured by you."

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