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Last Night in Shanghai Tonight is the last night of my stay in Shanghai. Tomorrow by this time, I'll have been in the train to my hometown. Can't wait! In Shanghai, the sky at night looks not the way it does in my hometown, where it's always pure black dotted with shinning stars. The sky painted on my window is always a mixture of several colors of the neon lights. Now it's the misture of yellow and blue. I took two exams today, English listening test and international trade law. The listening test is quite easy, haha I love Kony. But I almost fainted when I saw the paper for international trade law. It just proved that I should have just thrown the books away and gone to bed. All the material I prepared was not tested. What I just ignored were all required in the exam. So, after two years law studying, I come to realize that it's not about how hardworking you are, but how lucky you are. All you need is just some luck xD Another boy in our school is proved to be gay today. He always wears tight pants and put on a lot of perfume. I complained about the strong smell when he walked by, shaking his hips. I said "oh damn it, is he gay or something?" Girls around me were surprised and exclaimed “What? you didn't know that? We've known it in the first semester!” I was like... Well, you need to elect another gossip queen, haha. But I really wonder why in such a sexybabies' kingdom, with the ratio 9:1 of girls to boys, boys still choose to be gay? I'm not kidding, the boy who was just proved to be gay today, I visited his page of renren. I saw his profile picture, on which he was kissing a taller boy's check with his arms around his neck. I can only understand that more and more girls here tend to be bisexual. But boys, how come? Two more exams tomorrow. Should I stay up and hit the books? I guess so :(

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Last Night in Shanghai

 

Tonight is the last night of my stay in Shanghai. Tomorrow by this time, I'll will be have been in the train to on my way hometown. I just can't wait!

In The Shanghai, the night sky at night does not looks not the way it does in as my hometown.  , where it's It is always pure pitched black dotted with shinning stars. The ere, the sky is always painted on my window is always in a mixture of several many coloreds of the neon lights. Now it's At this moment, it is a the mixture of yellow and blue.

I took two exams today, an English listening test and the other on international trade law. The listening test is was quite easy. , haha I love Kony 不懂這句, Kony 是誰? 是什么東西? This is not relevant for most people.  Better to leave it out. But However, I almost fainted when I saw the paper for test on international trade law. It just proved that I Should have just thrown the books thrown away and gone to bed instead. All the material I prepared was not tested. What I just ignored were all required in the exam those that I had studied for were not tested and of course those that I did not were . So, after two years of studying law studying, I came to realize that it's it is not about how hardworking you are, but how lucky you are. All you need is just some luck! xD This is true for everything in life!  However, if you do not study in the first place, no matter how much luck you have, you still won't pass the exams.

Another boy in our school outed is proved to be gay today. He always wears tight pants and put on a lot of perfume. I complained about the strong smell when scent as he walked by and shaking he was sashaying away his hips. I said, "oh Damn it! Is he gay or what something?" The nearby girls around me were exclaimed in surprise, d and exclaimed “What? You didn't know that? We've known it already in the first semester!” I was like... Well, you need to elect another gossip queen!, haha. But Really! I really wonder why in such a "sexy babes babies kingdom", with the a ratio 9:1 of girls to boys, why do boys still choose to be gay? I'm kid not. He is really gay. kidding, the boy who was just proved to be gay today, I visited his blog and page of renren. I saw his profile picture. , on which He was kissing a taller boy's check with his arms around his neck. I can only understand that more and more girls here tend to be bisexual. But but boys?, How come?

Two more exams tomorrow. Should I stay up and hit the books? I guess should think so :(

Not too bad for the slangy part of your essay but is still not good enough.  You used the terms not quite correctly.  The word "Babes" is a slang for pretty girls, but not "babies"! Better pay more attention to your formal and proper standard English first.

 

Anyway, a good piece of daily ranting and gossip.  Gossip is always interesting.

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Last Night in Shanghai

Tonight is the last night of my stay in Shanghai. Tomorrow by this time, I'll have been in the train to my hometown. Can't wait!

In Shanghai, the sky at night looks not the way it does in my hometown, where it's always pure black dotted with shinning stars. The sky painted on my window is always a mixture of several colors of the neon lights. Now it's the misture of yellow and blue.

I took two exams today, English listening test and international trade law. The listening test is quite easy, haha I love Kony. But I almost fainted when I saw the paper for international trade law. It just proved that I should have just thrown the books away and gone to bed. All the material I prepared was not tested. What I just ignored were all required in the exam. So, after two years law studying, I come to realize that it's not about how hardworking you are, but how lucky you are. All you need is just some luck xD

Another boy in our school is proved to be gay today. He always wears tight pants and put on a lot of perfume. I complained about the strong smell when he walked by, shaking his hips. I said "oh damn it, is he gay or something?" Girls around me were surprised and exclaimed “What? you didn't know that? We've known it in since the first semester!” I was like... Well, you need to elect another gossip queen, haha. But I really wonder why in such a sexybabies' kingdom, with the ratio 9:1 of girls to boys, boys still choose to be gay? I'm not kidding, the boy who was just proved to be gay today, I visited his page of renren. I saw his profile picture, on which he was kissing a taller boy's check with his arms around his neck. I can only understand that more and more girls here tend to be bisexual. But boys, how come?

Two more exams tomorrow. Should I stay up and hit the books? I guess so :(

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@Marc W ; You know that your comment is just above right? Please go there and read it, you will be suprised: "mostly MEN think bisexuality is attractive in a girl". Further, you are right to your opinion, but I don't see how you can speak on behalf of half of the earths population. That is all, you adult-size baby.
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@Marc and Swechi Oh, hey I'm back wow what's going on? God, Marc I'm not bisexual >< And I don't wanna be attractive that way. But I agree that according to my own experience, I've been told like 2 or 3 times that boys are likely to be sexed up when they see bisexual girls' activities... I'm not so sure if all of them do, so, that's all I know. As for in prison, I really don't know. But I do see something like that in American TV series about prison. It's just TV series, it's derived from life but not just the accurate reflection of life. I'm sorry, "become gay" is not correct. Chinese people tend to think people become gay because people seldom realize that they are gay before they try dating or marrying someone who has opposite gender. But people are getting more and more open-minded andunderstanding about it. Most people here who are straight hold the similar attitude as mine, we're not against it, we just don't wanna be involved in it.
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Oh Swetchi, Well, I find yóur arguments ridiculous. And generalisation is generalisation. Hence: It does not say that every man thinks like that. No! I did not say that.....What are you? The political correct police? You're very annoying sorry!

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