我的中文呢？
我的中文呢...................

第一次，不好意思 ，我的中文非常不好呀。
这是我第一次写中文，我的中文非常不好。
我每天学习中文。。听力，看中文书，写汉字，说话。
 我每天都学习中文，练习听力、看中文书、学汉字、练习口语。
不过，我觉得我的中文还不好。
不过，我觉得我的中文还不够好。
我很想要我的中文说的很流利。
我很希望能说流利的中文。
我还看不懂中文报纸，听不懂中国的歌和电影。
现在我还看不懂中文的报纸，听不懂中文歌曲。（严格意义来说要说看电影而不是听电影，但是这个看和看报纸的还有点区别）
我常常想像 "我什么时候会说非常好的中文？？？“。 你觉得呢？
我常常在想，我什么时候才能把中文说的非常好呢？

我的中文呢？

第一次用中文写文章，不好意思 ，我的中文非常不好呀。我每天都在学习中文。。听力，看中文书，写汉字，说话。 不过，我觉得我的中文还是不好。我很想要我的中文说的很流利。我很想提升我的中文水平，直到我可以很流利地跟别人讲话为止。我还看不懂还没看懂中文报纸，听不懂中国的歌和电影。我常常在想像 "我到底什么时候会才可以说非常好的中文呢？？？“。 你觉得呢？

 

A couple of notes:

1. The first sentence is a little disconnected, if if you say it in English - "First time, very sorry, my Chinese is very bad."

 

2. “都” means "as well", and “在” is a particle that precedes a verbial relative clause, e.g. "learning Chinese" here. Together, “都在” carries the sense that you're doing something continuously, but yet you're not getting very far. For instance, “我每天都在做数学题，但是我的数学水平一点都没有改进。” "I'm doing Math questions every day, but my level of Math isn't improving by a single bit."

 

3. Please note the difference between “的” and “地” and “得”. “的” is the possessive particle in Chinese, while “地” makes an adjective an adverb. For example, “慢” turns into “慢慢地”. There are more advanced uses of the “的” particle, but it is NOT a replacement for “地”. And “得” is a particle whose usage is a bit more abstract, but in here, its use is to denote possibility. So when you said “说的很流利”, it should really be “说的很流利”.

 

4. “还看不懂” isn't incorrect, but I would imagine this to be something someone says when they are ridiculing you for not being able to understand something you read yet, as opposed to you still not being able to understand what you read, as in “（难道）你还看不懂吗？”, implying that the person is stupid, or what you're trying to express - “我还没看懂呢。” I still don't understand. 

 

5. “到底” is a difficult word to find a Chinese equivalent, I would say it's roughly equivalent to "on earth", as in “你到底什么时候才做完？” - "When on earth will you be done this this?", or "How much longer will it take you to finish this?", to express some degree of exasperation of doing something and it seeming so out of reach until completion. 

 

In response to your question, I think that it comes with time. For me, for instance, I'm doing Japanese, and I'm just biding my time, I'm setting an approximate framework for a year, and I'm mostly working on listening and reading. I think listening helps improve your understanding of how the language works in terms of its structure, and reading helps you naturall learn new words, as opposed to reciting vocab lists. 

 

So don't worry! Your Chinese will improve naturally over time - just be consistent in your efforts! 

 

Good luck and hope this helps! Cheers :)