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First notebook entry: Introducing myself 大家好! 我叫大卫,我十五岁,我是美国人我住在芝加哥。 我学中文一年。我爱中国因为中国文化很美! 我要中国人朋友所以我练习我的中文。

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大家好!
我叫大卫,今年十五岁,我是出生在芝加哥的美国人。 我学中文有一年了。我喜欢中国是因为中国文化很吸引我! 我想交中国朋友来练习我的中文。

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好!
我叫大卫,我十五岁,。我是美国人,我住在芝加哥。 我学中文一年了。我爱中国,因为中国文化很美有魅力! 我想要和中国人交朋友,所以我练习我的中文。

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好!
我叫大卫,我十五岁,我是美国人我住在芝加哥。 我学中文已经有一年。我爱中国因为中国有悠久的历史和灿烂的文化文化很美! 我想要结交更多的中国人朋友,所以我需要练习并提高我的中文水平。

 

  David ,GOOD JOB!  keep going^^

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好!
我叫大卫,我十五岁我是美国人我住在芝加哥。(In China, when you say something about yourself, we always use only one "I".for example:My name is David, 15-years-old, come from America and now living in Chicago)

我学中文一年。(Notice:In fact, you wanna say you have study Chinese one year.But when you translate the sentence,you forget the "have".In China, we called"已经".So, you can say "我已经学习了一年的中文")。

我爱中国因为中国文化很美!(When you say the culture is so interesting and you like it, Chinese usually say "China have a long long history",Translate:中国历史悠久/中国是一个历史悠久的国家)

我要中国人朋友(In fact, when you say I wanna meet a friend who is Chinese, you could say:"我想和一个中国人做(交)朋友")

所以我练习我的中文 (I know what you're saying, you wanna practice your oral Chinese, so you could say:"因此,我能够练习我的英文".Pay attention on that"因此", it is the meaning of the word:"so")

 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好!
我叫大卫,我十五岁,我是美国人,住在芝加哥。 我学中文已经有一年了。我爱中国因为中国文化很美! 我要中国人朋友所以我练习我的中文。-我想认识一些中国朋友帮我练习中文。

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