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A Women's crusade against Men - Pessimism
VI - Women’s Crusade against Men – Pessimism
While I was doing the dishes this morning, alone, without my wife at home or any other women from my family, I My mind was wandering thought my mind. I have always have considered myself an optimistic person. Facing the most difficult moments in life, I have been always been training myself to look for some any the good side, it doesn’t matter what the problem is.
I remembered. a few months ago, I had a health check-up made. After seeing the results of my exams ordered requested tests, the experienced doctor from one of the best Hearst's heart hospitals in my country, he asked me “do you want to know the truth”? To tell the truth, I didn’t, but I wasn’t supposed to say tell the truth when such an answer is asked requested by a cardiologist. I answered without any will of obeying my moral principles about not lying. Attempting a green, (?) and pretending to be strong, I said “yes, yes”, I am here to know the truth and do whatever I am supposed to do.
Without any compassion, with a professional coldness (detachment) that only some medical and executioners of the death penalty have, the cardiologist said “you are in serious danger. Your life is at risk. You have an important coronary artery almost blocked. You could die at any moment.” He stopped his phrase, looking at me, as if I was a dangerous criminal, not a patient.
I confess, I pretended that I was calm, I tried to swallow the saliva, but my mouth was dry.
What is 'attempting a green' ?
Adverbs of time are usually placed before the verb but after any auxillary verb.
I often/usually/sometimes consider....
I have often/usually/sometimes considered...
I have often been right.
Have is the auxillary verb.
A Women's crusade against Men - Pessimism
VI - Women’s Crusade against Men – Pessimism
While As I was doing the dishes that morning, alone, without my wife at home or any other female family memberomen from my family, I wandering thought my mind wandered off. I always have considered myself an optimistic person. When facing the most difficult moments in life, I have been always training myself try to to look for some any good the bright side of things., doesn’t matter what the problem is.
I remembered how I felt a few months ago when I had a medical, I had a health check-up made. After On seeing the results of my exams ordered, the experienced doctor from one of best Hearst’s Hospital, in my country, My Hearst Hospital doctor asked me, “Do you want know the truth”? To tell the truth, I didn’t, but I wasn’t supposed to say the truth when such an answer is asked by a cardiologist. I answered without any will of obeying my moral principles about not lying. Attempting a green, I pretending to be strong, I said “yes, yes”, I am here to know the truth and do what I am supposed to do. I was taken aback by such a blunt question. So I acted bravely and said, "Yes. I ready for the truth and need to do what is needed to be done."
Without any compassion, with a professional cold that only some medical and executors of the death penalty has, the cardiologist said “you are in serious danger. You life is at risk. You have an important coronary almost blocked. You can die at any moment.” He stopped his phrase, looking at me, as if I was a dangerous criminal, not a patient. With the cold precision of a professional executor, my cardiologist said,
"You are at high risk! You have a coronary blockage and can die at any moment."
I must confess... I pretended that I was to be calm. I tried to swallow the saliva, but my mouth was dry.
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