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Young People Should Go to University or Find a Job. Some People Suggest that High School Graduate Students Should Go to Universities to Have Higher Education, But Others Encourage Students to Find Jobs to Meet the Needs of the Society. Discuss Both Views and Give Your Opinion. With the increasing fierce competition of job market, some individuals are of the opinion that students should look for work after they graduated from high school. Yet my view is students would be well advised to attend collage to further their studies. It is true that university education help young people to hone their cooperative skill. For instance, students can participate in group discussion and preparation of presentation. By doing this, young people can learn how to collaborate with other individuals and have better team sprite, which is one of the essential elements for success when they grow up. Also, in university, obviously, there are professional knowledge and skills offering for students gaining better job development. By this I mean, those which they acquire in collage can be used in practical work. As a result of it, when they graduated from university, there are greater opportunities for them than their peers who do not get high education. Further, university education can cultivate efficient learning habits, which are also important quality that is helpful for success. It enables people to learn the job skills quickly and so they can have a better work achievement. On the other hand, those who argue that high school graduate students ought to be encouraged to search for work instead of pursing higher education. However, lack of basic training in university is hard for them to carry out more complex work. It may, therefore, damage their confidence and hinder their long-term professional development. In conclusion, I think students should further their studies in university, as they can get more benefits for their future.

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Young People Should Go to University or Find a Job.

Some People Suggest that High School Graduate Students Should Go to Universities to Have Higher Education, But Others Encourage Students to Find Jobs to Meet the Needs of the Society. Discuss Both Views and Give Your Opinion.


With the increasing fierce competition of job market, some individuals are of the opinion that students should look for work after they graduated from high school. Yet my view is students would be well advised to attend college to further their studies.

It is true that  a university education helps young people to hone their cooperative skills.  For instance, students can participate in group discussions and preparation of presentations. By doing this, young people can learn how to collaborate with other individuals and have better team spirit, which is one of the essential elements for success when they grow up.

Also, in the university, obviously, there are professional knowledge and skills offerings for students gaining better job development. By this I mean, those which they acquire in college can be used in practical work. As a result of it, when they graduate from university, there are greater opportunities for them than their peers who do not get high education.

Further, university education can cultivate efficient learning habits, which are also important qualities that are helpful for success. It enables people to learn job skills quickly and so they can have a better work history. 

On the other hand, those who argue that high school graduates ought to be encouraged to search for work instead of pursing higher education. However, lack of basic training in university is hard for them to carry out more complex work. It may, therefore, damage their confidence and hinder their long-term professional development.

In conclusion, I think students should further their studies in university, as they can get more benefits for their future.

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