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Another short tale from me
Who can correct this short text? Thank you in advance...
"I usually get up at 7:20 am everyday every day. To this hour I get up because I can prepare breakfast for all my family.
When my wife goes to takes the children at to school I stay at home cleaning the kitchen and after that, starting to study English in my study. I used to take a break for lunch at 11:00 am and when done finish it, I continue my studying English to until 1:00 pm.
At this time I make food start to cook and prepare the table and wait for their return. (=prepar all of things) to wshen they come back.
I have to admit that during the week that it is quite routine in the mornings. almost all morning are similar but However, in the weekend, I prefer to visit my parents and my mother-in-law because they cook better than me." Or you can say, "they are better cooks."
Although this tale seems boring bored, for me it is a good excercise to practice my English.
Regards and thank you again.
You write quite well. Some of your expressions are awkward but this is to be expected. Write more, get corrected more and your English will improve much. Send me a link to your essay if you like my corrections. This way, I won't miss yours.
Another short tale from me
Who can correct this short text? Thank you in advance...
"I usually get up at 7:20 am every day. I get up at this hour so I can prepare breakfast for my whole family."
When my wife takes the children to school, I stay at home and clean the kitchen. After that I start to study English in my study.
I take a break for lunch at 11:00 am and when I finish it, I continue to study English until 1:00 pm.
At this time I make food and prepare the table to wshen (not sure what you mean) when they come back.
I have to admit that( You don't have to write this)
During the week, almost all my mornings are similar. During the weekend I prefer to visit my parents and my mother-in-law because they are better cooks than me."
Although this tale seems boring, it is a good excercise for me to practice English.
Regards and thank you again.
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