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Vegetables Passing by a supermarket I spotted some baskets full of vegetables. Immediately I remind one conversation with my friend living really far away from me (yeah Sunny, be certain that this concerns you :-) ). As I remember she told me that vegetables in her country was the cheapest at the beginning of the spring because of its quality. Then the price slowly starts rising. Don't know why in my country the situation is totally different. If you wanna purchase some in the spring you'll pay for it much more than if you buy it later (i.e. summer). I don't really get it, especially if you look at quality of it. In the spring there is not possibility to find anything fresh. No matter what kind of vegetables you choose, no one tastes you. Perhaps the prices are associated with quantity of vegetables which are available on the marter in the spring. Perhaps.

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Haha! Futrzak~ Well done that you will keep writing. I look forward to witnessing your progress. Hmm, it sounds interesting that you went to buy vegetables. Will you cook? :-D I am curious about the topic about "vegetable price"....Which Sunny told you about that? O(∩_∩)O~ In China, vegetables are usually more expensive as a result of Spring Festival. When it comes to summer and early autumn, the harvest time, vegetables will be cheaper. I wish it is clearer now. Have a nice weekend! Keep smiling. :-D
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i think it's up to the situation between supply and market demand, if oversupply, cheap price, if vegetables are in short supply, prices are set high,
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Vegetables

Passing by a supermarket I spotted some baskets full of vegetables. Immediately I was reminded by one a conversation with my friend who lives living really far away from me (yeah Yes, Sunny, be certain that certainly this concerns you :-) ). As I remembered she told me that vegetables in her country was the were cheapest at the beginning of the spring because of its poor 1 quality. Then the price slowly starts to rise rising. Don't know why in my country the situation is totally the reverse different. If you wanna want 2 purchase some in the spring you'll will 3 have to pay more for it much more than if you buy it later (i.e. in the summer). I don't really get it, especially if you look at their quality of it. In the spring there it is not possibility possible to find anything fresh. No matter what kind of vegetables you choose, no one nothing tastes good you. Perhaps the prices are associated with quantity of vegetables which are available on the marter the availiablity in the spring. Perhaps.

1.   You need to put in the adjective otherwise it is assumed to be good quality and that contradicts the logic of you entire statement.

2.  Don't use slang in formal writing.  An essay is considered a formal piece of writing.

3.  Again you don't use contractions in essays.  These are use for writing dialogs, and conversations and in informal writing such as personal emails, etc.

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Hi,guy~~ I like your composition.I think it's good,because I love vegetables so much.
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If you look at when vegetables grow, you will see that the first fresh produce is really only available around May. Before that, you are buying the stocks from last year... or the greenhouses. The first things that come up are maybe asparagus and strawberries.

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