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Vegetables
Passing by a supermarket I spotted some baskets full of vegetables. Immediately I was reminded by one a conversation with my friend who lives living really far away from me (yeah Yes, Sunny, be certain that certainly this concerns you :-) ). As I remembered she told me that vegetables in her country was the were cheapest at the beginning of the spring because of its poor 1 quality. Then the price slowly starts to rise rising. Don't know why in my country the situation is totally the reverse different. If you wanna want 2 purchase some in the spring you'll will 3 have to pay more for it much more than if you buy it later (i.e. in the summer). I don't really get it, especially if you look at their quality of it. In the spring there it is not possibility possible to find anything fresh. No matter what kind of vegetables you choose, no one nothing tastes good you. Perhaps the prices are associated with quantity of vegetables which are available on the marter the availiablity in the spring. Perhaps.
1. You need to put in the adjective otherwise it is assumed to be good quality and that contradicts the logic of you entire statement.
2. Don't use slang in formal writing. An essay is considered a formal piece of writing.
3. Again you don't use contractions in essays. These are use for writing dialogs, and conversations and in informal writing such as personal emails, etc.
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