First notebook entry: Introducing myself

因为我非常喜欢中国文化，和历史，而且还觉得中国姑娘是最美丽的，所以我学习汉语

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

因为我非常喜欢中国文化和中国历史，还而且我觉得中国姑娘是最美丽的，所以我（喜欢）学习汉语。

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

因为我非常喜欢中国文化，历史，还觉得中国姑娘是最美丽的，所以我学习汉语

The sentence is right, but usually, the words culture, history should be conbined with 和 when there are only two things that you want to point out.

e.g. 我爱苹果和梨 (I like apple and pear) seems to be better than 我爱苹果、梨. (by the way, the latter half sentence "I also think that..." should be counted as a new beginning with another verb).

And I personally believe that 并 is better than 还, because when we use 还, the verb is almost the same one:

e.g.除了梨，我还想吃苹果 (Besides pears, I also want to eat apple), It's obviously here that both pear and apple share the same verb "eat".